Much Prettier In Death

She was much prettier in death
than any day she had been alive
her mouth softly closed
eyes in gentle repose

no yelling
no grouching
no griping
no complaining

I saw her husband’s genuine smile
For the first time ever
at her funeral luncheon, 
And I had lived next door to them for thirty-six years.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Should I say this is an unfortunate event? What an observation? Great pen my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:55 PM
I have had so many positive comments on this which is not what I had anticipated.
Bauer Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:34 PM
ha! what an observation! well done, caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Thank you Ilene. I had a particular person in mind.
Rigoler Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 9:07 AM
You may be right on this observation, still it depends on the expertise of the mortician and the condition of the cadaver before work on it began. That the dead are at peace is only appearance-wise – Ecclesiastics (9:5) is very much to the point. / Maurice
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:56 PM
I will not be caring as I will be cremated.
Hankins Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:34 AM
This is often the case, Caren...more peaceful in repose!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:56 PM
For sure!
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