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Ms Red Rose

From germination, a seed spreads into a flower;  A beauty queen blooms to bedazzle the senses ;  Her oval shaped hip bares sweet smelling fruits;  Her Long slender stems lend a tall structure; Nominated as the flower of the hearts, The apple of the eyes, A prominent star awaiting to be plucked; But wait a minute, a voluptuous rose bares sharp thorns?; Evidently, a defensive wall capable of drawing blood; Has a flower's beaming optimism evolved to became fallacious? Or was she more than often delivered to broken promises; The ills to thy red shaped heart she so long mourned; The injustice done to thy unconditional love thou shalt know; Heaven hath no rage, like love turn'd to hatred; Nor Hell hath no sharp thorns, like a flower scorned; Do handle her wisely so not to gash red; Scars suggests that thy have bled; A slave enternally to her sweet aroma; Forever more in a love lust coma; This is a curious and mystical case of a gorgeous red rose By Hussein Farah Written 12/22/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2012 5:54:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Hussein. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/3/2012 8:08:00 AM
Awww, thank you Carol for such a warm welcome. I will go through yours but the sheer numbers poems you have dont know where to start...Any suggestions where i can take my writing skills? Thanks again, God bless

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