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Ms Poe

Ms. Poe bathe me in your radiating light. The hunger in me for your poetry feeds my raging appetite! As I bleed I need to soak in your demonic spirituality. Come along with your song, and make my darkest fantasies reality! Ms. Poe I kneel before your throne, and plant kisses on your feet. I offer you the organ beneath my breastbone; Can you hear my heart beat? The rhythm of my heart is like a band of demons hissing. You fill my soul with your poetic art as if we were physically kissing! Ms. Poe lock me in your chains, and cuff me to your bed. Inject your poison in my veins, and rule the thoughts in my head! For you my soul I'll forfeit, just to live with you in torment!! I'll cast my body into the bottomless pit, just to be your eternal instrument!!! *Written for my friend X Jimmy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 10:21:00 PM
nothing against two previous comments but i believe it incorrect to think that the soul can only belong to god, a soul can never really be given anyway but it is defeating the point of the poem here. in giving the soul to another we are sharing ourselves with another and that is what i believe you were going for jimmy? i thought it a very stirring piece of the poem that spoke volumes about the character of the person you are sharing yourself with. amazing write! --Madison
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Date: 11/29/2010 2:21:00 PM
JAM, the only comment I can make here is, as Sheol said, think again 'cause your soul is priceless!! It belongs to only God but you know who wants it? He comes in many disguises so never offer it to anyone...you know what I mean? I know that you're not serious, but don't even say this jokingly. This friend must be exceptional..lol. Just be very careful. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/29/2010 11:29:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:18:00 AM
Howdy Jimmy: A lot of people think that sacrificing their souls is a small price to pay for the pleasures and treasures of this world...that is not correct. I pray that you rethink your stand concerning this way of thinking. May GOD bless you today and 4 ever.
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