Mr Potato

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Vector potato cartoon character giving the thumbs up. vector hand drawn illustration

There was a new potato that had just been harvest born
On opening his eyes a rooster crowed its horn.
He had grown rather quickly and grown rather strong
But that's when his feelings started to feel wrong.

Mr Potato had noticed he was feeling very sad
Sometimes it felt like, he was going slowly mad.
He was feeling confused and didn't understand why
Deep down he felt rotten, he just wanted to cry.

He discovered a big chip on his little shoulder
That grew too heavy to carry as he got older.
Then there was the urge to pound and to mash
That got quiet messy but made a tasty hash.

He gave a brill roasting when he felt mad
That was either good or extremely bad.
On the days he was fine he felt chirpy and crisp
Those were the days he fancied going for a dip.

When it was too hot he felt rather boiled
And when it was cooler he liked to feel the cold.
His skin went more brown when he got baked
His spud-kini gave him wedges - for goodness sake!

Mother Nature felt sorrow for this confused spud
So she sent a gentle breeze that felt like a hug.
It was important he knew, he is valued so much
He smiled and listened when he felt her soft touch.

"These feelings that you feel are normal you see,
For you are a potato these feelings come naturally.
Your loved by so many and desired too
Your the stable in diets and great in a stew".

"Your the star at every vegan, society social bash
In soups an as a bread, your the main in creamy mash.
Your the star on the topping of a shepherds pie
Your famous world over, a very popular guy."

"You feed so many people, the rich and the poor
Your popular and wanted, it's you they adore.
You come from a large family of sisters and brothers
You have royal connections you will discover."

"The farmers will feed you and keep you warm
Your important to millions you have texture and great form.
King Edward and Charlotte, Maris Piper, Desiree
These are just a few from your large family tree."

He felt happy to know that he had a purpose
And easy to grow and there was even some surplus.
Feeding so many, especially the poor
He was now ready, to go through the kitchen door.

                08.09.23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/3/2024 7:11:00 AM
The humble potato does not goes enough air-time on here Emilia - so bravo. Pfff to butterflies, rainbows and unicorns.. let's celebrate the earthy authenticity of this fine (versatile) tuber. Great job!!
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Date: 10/5/2023 3:07:00 PM
So good to see a potato poem, such a versatile vegetable too. John
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Date: 10/6/2023 5:21:00 AM
They are indeed John. My father use to grow them with good results. I tried, they got blight. Thank you for reading. Emilia : )
Date: 9/9/2023 12:48:00 PM
Hello again, I like mine double fried,with garlic mayo dip.lol Loved this, great poem about my mate spud.lol.:-):-)
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:31:00 PM
Hello again Simon and thank you so much. I went off garlic when I put too much in a dinner I was cooking at the time so just stick to good old fashion tomato sauce now with chips lol Emilia : )
Date: 9/8/2023 4:20:00 PM
There is that wonderful Emilia humour! So clever and funny….love your poem and love the ole spud!! Debx
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Deb. He is a happy spud now lol. Emilia : ) x
Date: 9/8/2023 3:47:00 PM
what a fun poem, lots of potato puns, you smashed this one for hunour Emilia :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. I enjoyed writing this one, the puns just seemed to fall in nicely. Emilia : ) x
Date: 9/8/2023 3:45:00 PM
Very entertaining...I do love Mr.Potato.He is very special..This tribute to him brings him justice.Lovely.
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine and is lovely to meet you. He is an all rounder that is for sure. Emilia : )
Date: 9/8/2023 3:18:00 PM
A fun read and a FAV for my list. You get an * for creativity, Emilia. Well written with good rhyming. I love potatoes. Have an enjoyable weekend! Bill
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Bill for the fav and star. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I hope you had a good weekend. Emilia : )
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