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***** There once was a leprechaun. who lived in a town named St. John. He thought he'd be bold and hide all his gold. Under Shamrocks in the lawn. Sean McWitty was his given name. He loved to play mischievous games. Left foot prints down the hall. Hung Shamrocks on the walls. Paints beards on pictures in frames. Posters hung all over town. Mr. McWitty needs to be found. This elf is so mean. Our cats are all green. Our mayor awoke as a clown. Sean McWitty has disappeared. In March, he will soon reappear. "Beware" don't give him a chance. He will put you in a trance. Then paint "Shamrocks" on your rear. 3/1/2022 Syllablecounter.net Verse 1- 7.7.5.5.7. Verse 2- 8.8.6.6.8. Verse 3- 7.7.5.5.7. Verse 4- 7,7,7,7,7

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Date: 3/2/2022 8:32:00 PM
This is such an interesting tale... ! Let us all be careful of this mischievous elf ! Much enjoyed the image and the series of limericks ! Stay Blessed, Debra ! Hugs ....
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/3/2022 2:17:00 AM
Valsa, I enjoyed your comment and thanks for your encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/2/2022 10:57:00 AM
Steer clear! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/2/2022 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Rico, enjoyed your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/2/2022 10:51:00 AM
Oh my, what a mean leprechaun! We will be watching out for him! My goodness, lol, this is fantastic!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/2/2022 2:29:00 PM
Thanks BJ, Happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/2/2022 1:30:00 AM
This is excellent!! Just loved the way you told the story.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/2/2022 2:28:00 PM
Thanks You, Swetha, for your encouragement. Happy you enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/1/2022 8:07:00 PM
These are excellent limericks, Debra. Each one is a gem, and I love the rhyming. Best wishes, Evelyn
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/1/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn, so happy you found humor in the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/1/2022 6:50:00 PM
I looked at the leprechaun's picture, and I saw 'Sleepy' of the Seven Dwarfs. lol. Maybe McWitty went into hibernation! ~ Yawning Away
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/1/2022 8:21:00 PM
Awh! Looks can be deceiving. Never turn your back on a magical Leprechaun by the name of Mc"WITTY"(lol)... Gershon, Thanks for reading the poem taking the time to comment. Blessings ~ Debra 
Date: 3/1/2022 5:05:00 PM
Great Limerick, Debra, a so timely. Very impressed with the number of verses you used to tell the story. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/1/2022 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Bill, Happy to talk to you. Thanks for the comment. Enjoy your evening. Blessings ~ Debra

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