Mr Grumpy's Rainbow: Contest

I looked out of the window what did I see
A beautiful rainbow shining there for me

Remembering the story mam read last night
Will have to go outside, sure it will be alright

If I borrow the brolly with red spots on show
My sister is asleep, she will never know.

I crept out of the door hoping it didn’t creak,
toddled to the garden bench, where I play hide and seek.

Scrambled upon the seat was no easy feat,
with my short legs and tiny feet.

Umbrella over my head I jiggled with glee
to see the rainbow in front of me.

Mam read that Mr Grumpy would send the rain
I hope he cheers up so sun shines again.

Am wondering, if I called his name, he just might
Let Mr Sunshine put things right

Can’t believe my eyes, so surprised to see
all the care bears waving to me.

The little umbrella didn’t keep me so dry,
I am soaking wet but I won’t cry.

At bedtime now, will listen with glee,
next time mam reads to me.

Mam’s stories are really true
Hope you enjoyed this one too

Penned 23 September 2017

Contest:  Eve Roper. Red Polka Dot Umbrella.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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White Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 6:00 AM
I hadn't seen this earliere, Seren. I love it and it's a well deserved placement :)
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 12:40 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
Roberts Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:38 AM
Thank you very much.....Seren
La France Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your win with this sweet write !
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on your win, Seren , you captured the child feelings , thank you … Hugs Eve ~`*
May Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:59 PM
I sure did..Wonderful story Seren...best wishes in the contest
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Aww. thank you so much Joseph.......Seren
Lane Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Absolutetootly adorable, Seren.
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Glad it was tootably tootably........thank you Lin.......Seren
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 11:20 AM
Fab and fav
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:08 AM
absolutely adorable Seren its just perfect for the contest I could imagine a tiny child saying this:-) Will do well in the contest!:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Lovely and so cute Seren!
Talwar Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 8:50 PM
What a beautiful piece. I loved it.kids will enjoy too. Nice imagery.keep writing.
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