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Mr Grumpy's Rainbow: Contest

I looked out of the window what did I see A beautiful rainbow shining there for me Remembering the story mam read last night Will have to go outside, sure it will be alright If I borrow the brolly with red spots on show My sister is asleep, she will never know. I crept out of the door hoping it didn’t creak, toddled to the garden bench, where I play hide and seek. Scrambled upon the seat was no easy feat, with my short legs and tiny feet. Umbrella over my head I jiggled with glee to see the rainbow in front of me. Mam read that Mr Grumpy would send the rain I hope he cheers up so sun shines again. Am wondering, if I called his name, he just might Let Mr Sunshine put things right Can’t believe my eyes, so surprised to see all the care bears waving to me. The little umbrella didn’t keep me so dry, I am soaking wet but I won’t cry. At bedtime now, will listen with glee, next time mam reads to me. Mam’s stories are really true Hope you enjoyed this one too Penned 23 September 2017 Contest: Eve Roper. Red Polka Dot Umbrella.

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Date: 10/8/2017 6:00:00 AM
I hadn't seen this earliere, Seren. I love it and it's a well deserved placement :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:40:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/7/2017 2:38:00 AM
Thank you very much.....Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 7:00:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your win with this sweet write !
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Date: 10/6/2017 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Seren , you captured the child feelings , thank you … Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:59:00 PM
I sure did..Wonderful story Seren...best wishes in the contest
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2017 6:29:00 PM
Aww. thank you so much Joseph.......Seren
Date: 9/23/2017 1:54:00 PM
Absolutetootly adorable, Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2017 6:31:00 PM
Glad it was tootably tootably........thank you Lin.......Seren
Date: 9/23/2017 11:20:00 AM
Fab and fav
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Date: 9/23/2017 7:08:00 AM
absolutely adorable Seren its just perfect for the contest I could imagine a tiny child saying this:-) Will do well in the contest!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/22/2017 9:03:00 PM
Lovely and so cute Seren!
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Date: 9/22/2017 8:50:00 PM
What a beautiful piece. I loved it.kids will enjoy too. Nice imagery.keep writing.
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