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Mr All That- Rant Against Men

Who the hell do you think you are? Who give you the right To behave Like the rest of the cave men? I thought you were enlightened Learned I thought…. Damn you! Damn you for wasting my time My love My life On someone like you! I thought you were made With heavenly fibers With other world cells That would appreciate the honesty The devotion The care The babying The being at your beck and call The moving my schedule around to fit you The moving my day around to suit you The moving my life around to accommodate YOU That you found in me!!!! I thought.... DAMN! But you are like the rest Once you have it all You take it for granted Think you are the king of the world THE MASTER OF THE UNIVERSE You are just a man A MAN A typical MAN Need the mystery??? The chase???? The need to hunt To capture your prey Still burns in your veins? GO then Get OUT Go and hunt Just don’t expect to come here...tired, weary And have your meal ready And your desert to be me All creamed up Ready.... To be licked clean... Need to be treated like dirt??? To want? To pursue? Is that why You came here to end it all? I’m no longer a challenge for you? Too much of a commitment involved? Is your baggage getting in the way? I could have unpacked it for you And seen you through Damn…damn damn damn I’ll never learn To hold back And not give it all away Now you want to leave??? Yea, it’s been nice OF COURSE IT’S BEEN NICE, MORON I gave you my heart and soul THAT’S EQUIVALENT TO PARADISE Yes, dear… You would like to leave? Can’t give me what I deserve BLA BLA BLA BLA Shut up! LEAVE! GOOD RIDDANCE! I won’t grieve Let me walk you to the door I gave you all and more Not because you were all that But because I’m ALL THAT! And MORE That’s the way I love That’s the way I adore Go….good luck When that temptress leaves you high and dry And you taste the poison in her pie When you finally come to see She has the breasts But NO HEART underneath You'll remember me….. Don’t come to this door JUST LET ME BE! Don't you DARE go knock on this door Because, MR ALL THAT! “LOVE DON’T LIVE ANYMORE.” Eileen Manassian Ghali Inspired by something someone dear to my heart is going through....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/13/2013 7:04:00 PM
I had to read this poem. You had a lot of steamy anger to vent. It sure beats putting someone in the hospital and spending time in jail. Getting it off your chest. Good for you. That is something you don't want to hold inside.
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Date: 9/3/2013 9:37:00 AM
I bow in your foundation cracking reverence. Ah, such power & focus in these lines. A heart scorned will never end well. Wonderful declaration!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/4/2013 9:51:00 AM
Hell knows not the fury of a woman scorned! YES!!!! FOUNDATION CRACKING!! Drake...YOU ROCK! :) THANKS!!! :)
Date: 9/2/2013 4:55:00 PM
Wow.. passionate and angry. Nice write
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2013 2:53:00 AM
:) Thanks...had to let off steam...If I could get my hands on the guy....well, let's just say this was a safer thing to do. Thanks for the visit!
Date: 9/2/2013 4:32:00 PM
Always with the rants my little Desert Orchid, have you done now, and where's my dinner got to? lol Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2013 2:55:00 AM
OH GOOD GRIEF....DESSERT...DESSERT is definitely O U T!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2013 2:54:00 AM
Yup.....I'm done! Feels good. Dinner??? Hmmmmm...think I could still offer that, but DESERT IS DEFINITELY OUT!!!! LOL....take care, Richard...You can't take ANYTHING seriously, can you???
Date: 9/2/2013 4:13:00 PM
Wooooo. Wooooo....the girl is on her game!!!!! I'm out of breath!!!! Ooooooooooh...well well...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2013 2:56:00 AM
And the ball is out of the field...HOME RUN!!!! ;) Thanks, MD....Love you. I feel bad about using the word MORON.... :( silly me!
Date: 9/2/2013 2:44:00 PM
wow! very powerful and poetic, too! you go, girl!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2013 2:57:00 AM
Ilene....you are cheering me on??? Why, thanks, my dear! Didn't know you have a fighting spirit underneath all that charm! ;)
Date: 9/2/2013 2:18:00 PM
Just had to see this one...Mr. All That...ha...awesome title. And a fine rant!...if do say so meself.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2013 2:57:00 AM
Thanks, Caleb...Men sometimes lose the plot...They need help! I'm more than happy to oblige!
Date: 9/2/2013 9:34:00 AM
Now that is a lady in shining armour..I love every bit of it : yay : )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/2/2013 12:10:00 PM
Thanks, Beautiful! Sometimes we girls have got to stick together, eh? ;) Thanks for the visit...I've never been called a KNIGHTESS in shining armour. I like it! Hugs!
Date: 9/2/2013 6:37:00 AM
WOW! WOW! WOW! You tell it like it is, my dear Miss Boop! Kudos, kudos, kudos... love ya dear lady! Warm huggles, Kenny signing off! xoxox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/2/2013 12:08:00 PM
Yea....Kenny....someone close to my heart went through a break up recently...I adore her....and I just had to rant.....Thanks for the visit...and the huggles.....I little down today....They come in handy!

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