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Mr, Sandman

Mr. Sandman bring me a dream To last me all evening long While I slumber in my bed Yet to-night I toss and turn So work your magic on me Bring sleep sand for my dream I want to slumber all night long Take me to my special place To visit there by the shore Looking at the water to be calm To listen to the waves As they come to the shore I like the sound of water The waves are music to my ears It is so calming to relax Brings me peace of mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/10/2017 11:09:00 AM
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2017 5:59:00 PM
Hello Richard,how are you doing? Fine i hope.Your welcome.
Date: 8/10/2017 11:08:00 AM
I could have used him last night. I enjoyed this relaxing write.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2017 6:00:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading this poem you wrote. I will be reading more of your poems. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 8/5/2017 12:48:00 PM
The sea has a magic, I can tell you that first hand...I've lived around it all my life and it still amazes me...Water is therapeutic...Hope the Sandman come to your aid tonight...Until then have a nice day
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2017 5:51:00 PM
Hello Micheal,yes the water is so soothing.Looking at it being calming.The sound of water is calming so relaxing. Mr. Sand man brings me to water when I am asleep. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 8/4/2017 5:51:00 PM
Hello Darlene, This is a really neat and uplifting write on a familiar theme and old song. But I do really like your verse here. I'm for whatever works because the older I get, it seems that real-sustained sleep is a thing of the past. Have A Great Weekend, and thanks too for your recent comment on my "The Curve of Time" poem. Maybe "The Curve of Insomnia" might be a counter-theme to write about. Maybe . . . Cheers, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/11/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Darlene!! Yes, based on your note below, I do recommend you explore writing a poem on "The Curve of Insomnia" or something to that effect. Why not?? I think it's brilliant idea. Best Wishes, Gary
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2017 12:12:00 PM
Hello Gary,I am so pleased to hear that you have enjoyed my poem.Yes it is an old song, but the word are my own.I will be thinking of how to write a poem of The Curve of Insomina
Date: 8/2/2017 9:49:00 AM
I too like the sound of water whether running in a brook, out of a fountain or the waves on the beach. Hope your sleep is better this next night.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 1:27:00 PM
Hello Alfred,I like the sound of water, so relaxing.Yes even the fountain water is relaxing to listen to. Have a good day my friend.
Date: 8/2/2017 9:16:00 AM
Hi Darlene , lovely calming write enjoyable read :))) hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 1:54:00 PM
I forgot the hugs.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 1:30:00 PM
Hello Niall,I am so pleased.with this poem because I like the sound of the water,so relaxing for me. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/2/2017 6:08:00 AM
Very nice Darlene . I enjoyed this :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 9:03:00 AM
Hello Heidi,I am pleased you enjoyed my poem. Have a nice morning my friend.

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