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Moving Day

My son’s new home awaits him – Freshly painted, scrubbed and bare. I hope it will embrace him And that he’ll be happy there. We raised him in the city But he’s always yearned for space And now, with wife and baby, He has found his nesting place. It isn’t all that far away But lacks that city strife, A lovely place to raise a child And settle with a wife. I’ll have to drive to visit now. We’re thirty miles apart; But there will always be a spot For him within my heart... And for his family as well – His new suburban son, Whose growing days and escapades Have only just begun. The moving truck will be there soon; The rooms will warm and fill. We’ll gather on Thanksgiving, Celebration on the bill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/27/2013 4:40:00 PM
Moving to the suburbs in hopes of half a chance. To scrape together some sort of life by the seat of his pants. There's nothing but the moon and stars to hang his hat upon. At night when darkness kisses sky and city lights are gone. Peace. :) Maybe you can dvr that episode of When I met your mother. Or go online. I think you'd truly enjoy it. Toodles. :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:26:00 AM
lovely Ilene as all of your work is xx
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Date: 11/25/2013 10:10:00 PM
Another wonderfully charming poem. Wishing your family the very best this holiday season.
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