Moving Day

I jotted the number down with a pen
called and set the date of time and when
two men and a truck
finally showed up
outside my door stood two stick figured men



7-6-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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January 7, 2021 at 10:16 AM
This brought a smile to my face. Well done my friend. Keep posting. God |Bless, JB
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October 25, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Hey long time no see.. hope you are well
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November 20, 2019 at 1:47 AM
Oh,man ... this funny poem brought a big boy grin, Che. I do miss your hilarious musing. Hope all is well w/you. Love and more love always.
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October 8, 2018 at 9:50 AM
I'm wondering why you stopped posting and why Mike Hauser stopped posting
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August 2, 2018 at 7:29 AM
I like this Cheryl, made me laugh!!!
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August 2, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; I'm glad you enjoyed it and got a chuckle out of it my poetic friend!~Che :)
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July 12, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Lol!
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July 12, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks for visit and glad you chuckle out of it Mike!~Che :)
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July 11, 2018 at 4:18 AM
Good one, Cheryl!
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July 11, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Elaine; I really appreciate it!~Che :)
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July 8, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Excellent limerick my friend. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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July 11, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ravi; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)
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July 7, 2018 at 3:15 PM
- You need Muscle men at your service, Cheryl :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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July 11, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anne-Lise; so true needing muscles rather than stick arms lol!~Che :)
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July 6, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Lol! Your humor never fails to give me giggles, Cheryl. A wonderful limerick! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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July 7, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan; glad you got chuckle out of it! I know a lot of folks probably haven't seen the 2 men and a truck company logo and wonder what I mean by stick figured men! Warmest wishes to you too my poetic friend~Che :)
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July 6, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Yikes.. so much for the heavy stuff ;). Nice Limerick, Cheryl!
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July 7, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Lyric Man; I really appreciate it!~Che :)
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