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You are burnt in my being. These small lines around your mouth, full lips brushed in wild gouache strokes Eyes of Prussian blue, aquamarine gems to quench fire, to evoke thirst.... In fidgety sticky nights you are draped around me, wrinkled in rosy lines drawn over my chest, engraved in my foggy mind. My inept fingers on your violin strings, my loosely threaded bow stroking your hair, caressing your meandering frame, while I hear the soft chime of your voice, symphony in movements never heard but deeply felt. You are burnt in my soul. *** May 5, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Maria Williams

Date: 5/7/2017 7:15:00 AM

Poetry at its finest Dear Darren, who else could make the violin sing like you do in your lovely words. Just lovely. A 7++

Darren White
Date: 5/7/2017 7:18:00 AM

I just knew you'd like this one :) Thanks Maria.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2017 12:30:00 PM

a breathing piece with sparkling emotions well defined, darren.. huggs

Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 12:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/6/2017 4:31:00 AM

Good Afternoon Darren. Allow me to say this is more than stunning more than beautiful more than emotional and yes more than real all the above. In short this is poetry with a most perfect ending line and poetic expression to match the entry and poetry itself. Read back the line and your words and you will see. It is an honor always. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done completely and entirely. Stay well please.

Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 6:27:00 AM

Dance and music, especially the combo, are extremely important to me. It is poetry in motion, and that is what I see while composing a poem. Thanks my dear friend :)

John Herlihy

Date: 5/6/2017 2:11:00 AM

This is powerful stuff, all senses alive. Well done. John

Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 6:22:00 AM

Thank you so very much John :)

Miraj Raha

Date: 5/5/2017 7:16:00 PM

simply brilliant darren!!!You never cease to amaze us with your talent.Keep on writing and I will keep on reading.

Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 12:11:00 AM

Miraj, thank you, you love my poems and I am humbled

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2017 2:52:00 PM

Darren I like the violin the way it sounds is so calming to me. I also like classical music.

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, I do too :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/5/2017 1:31:00 PM

Your expressive, descriptive words, sound sensual, painting a many colored canvas of sights, and a symphony of sounds, that the reader can easily relate to, as they feel your words come to life within the reading of this poem. Emile. #7

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 1:51:00 PM

Your comments alone are little poems Emile, I love that, thank you so very much for liking my poem, and for the 7.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/5/2017 12:20:00 PM

This is a beatiful musical piece Piroet. Gorgeous! 7 xomo

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 12:34:00 PM

Hey, ma mo, thank you, also for the 7 :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/5/2017 11:16:00 AM

I can hear every note perfectly played...delicate and beautiful

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 11:21:00 AM

Thank you Tim, a sweet symphony :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/5/2017 10:31:00 AM

What a beautiful and hypnotic composition your poem has played for us today my friend. Amazing poetry as usual.

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 10:37:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend, I love it that you like my musical poem :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/5/2017 9:42:00 AM

Upon reading such love-kissed poetry, the softness and eloquence of your lines magically etch themselves in the heart. That is stunningly beautiful Darren:) Amitiés

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 12:30:00 PM

I really don't understand what it is with these disappearing comments.... I wrote one, and it disappeared! Merci Anne-Marie, it was a musical love, writing this poem :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/5/2017 9:28:00 AM

A symphony of love..beautiful write Darren

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 12:30:00 PM

Yes, a symphony of love indeed, thank you.