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Movement At the Sea

Melodic are the waves, white foam across the sand Spreading like fingertips, reaching along the land Moving tiny grains and pieces of shell Tumbling inward, as the tide begins to swell Not a fragment of life is discounted by the sea Where everything is something, as tiny as can be The sand is dried by the heat of the sun As the wind turns it into, blown dunes for fun Where fragments build scenic views at the sea All from something, as tiny as can be Heidi Sands 5/25/19

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Date: 7/11/2019 4:41:00 PM
This is a very melodic write about the sea. ..beautifully done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/11/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne. I am happy tp hear your positive feedback :)
Date: 5/31/2019 12:03:00 PM
Ohhhhh that was just beautiful Heidi, and describes the sea so well. I love the sea and am so lucky to live beside it and witness her changing hues and moods daily. An exquisite write Heidi - thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx l
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2019 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Ann. I am happy to read your comment. Enjoy, the beautiful sea :)
Date: 5/30/2019 3:50:00 PM
The sea has its own type of magic and it is breathtaking! Well done, a beautiful pen about one of my favorite things.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2019 3:53:00 PM
You are right, the sea has own magic. Thank you for your kind comments :)
Date: 5/29/2019 12:00:00 PM
A terrific write with such excellent rhythm and rhyme - love how your imagination and fascination run rampant by the movement of the sea! I become whole when I stand by the edge of the sea and feel the waves lapping at my feet. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. And what you say sounds very relaxing , waves lapping at your feet :)
Date: 5/25/2019 5:37:00 PM
Love this line, Heidi: All from something, as tiny as can be.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2019 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 5/25/2019 4:03:00 PM
Nice flow in your words..and the imagery quite beautiful...in melodies of the ocean. Well written poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2019 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for your kind feedback :)

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