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Mouth - Contest Newest Poems

Moist sensual lips Open to receive kisses Undying love projected Tongue to find the unexpected Home to many phases of love Penned 6 September 2013

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 3:21:00 PM

I like this one from you Seren. Sensual and enticing.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 8:09:00 PM

Hi Mustapha, thanks for your comment ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2013 1:20:00 AM

gosh, this one was not among the poems I read just now over at my contest page either. you didn't enter, Seren?

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/14/2013 2:02:00 AM

LOL this was the 3rd one I wrote yes I entered Andrea...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/9/2013 9:43:00 AM

Wow, and ,, i just love this Seren, not only clever but intriguing also.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/9/2013 9:57:00 AM

Is that right Harry, had an N.A. so I cocked up somewhere. But was fun to write at 3 am . How are you my friend? ....Seren

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/9/2013 3:55:00 AM

SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/9/2013 9:57:00 AM

Thanks Liam ...Seren

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/6/2013 11:04:00 AM

Ooo........who but you could make a sensual poem out of such a simple acrostic......?? But indeed you did !! Well done!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 10:23:00 PM

Confused myslf then , i have written for the acrostic contest, that the one i meant there? Didnt know whether to change its entry to this one. Decided to use it on this great contest.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:27:00 PM

LOL Carriei should have made this my contest entry maybe, never mind i will stick with my first choice...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/5/2013 10:23:00 PM

This is awesome, this is such a tremendous and wondrous write my friend! I am most impressed by your cleverness within this poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What an outstanding verse, Great Work!! Soup Mail my friend!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:20:00 AM

Hi Russell, glad you stopped by and thanks for the comments...Seren

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/5/2013 10:21:00 PM

This one is very nice - I like the association of 'tongue' and 'many phases of love' - it brings to mind the actual power of the tongue, to make or break. Very well done Seren!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:19:00 AM

Hi Vicky Lovely to see you, thanks for stopping by

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2013 9:25:00 PM

Hahaha, nice way to bring sleep

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:20:00 AM

Hmmmm.