MOUSE PRINCESS

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MOUSE PRINCESS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In a kingdom where cheese was the prize, Lived a mouse princess with green eyes. She donned a small crown, Above her royal gown, And danced under moonlit skies. She hosted royal balls in the night, With her friends, the brave bugs in flight. They waltzed across the floor, While the cats did snore and snore, And the cheese wheels rolled with delight. “Oh, dear!” squeaked the princess with glee, “The best party’s here. Hurry! Come and see!” With a nibble and bite, We’ll feast till the morning light, And toast with a crumb of brie!

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Date: 8/9/2025 4:32:00 AM
Just delightful, Sara. It should be in an anthology for children. Well done.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/9/2025 6:01:00 PM
thank you, Jim! I appreciate the thought about a children's anthology. Great idea....wishing you a pleasant weekend, Sara
Date: 8/1/2025 7:28:00 PM
O my goodness, what a delightful treat to read this poem ~ added to my FAVE's
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/9/2025 6:00:00 PM
thank you, Line! I am grateful for your enthusiasm and your fave! Wishing you a splendid weekend, Sara
Date: 7/29/2025 4:43:00 PM
You are so creative with the triple Limerick and your rhyming is exquisite. Write On! my Eastside Writing Bear. Hugs, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/29/2025 4:52:00 PM
thank you, my Limerick king! Your opinion of my Limericks are much appreciated. lots of hugs from me to you!
Date: 7/29/2025 6:37:00 AM
Just wonderful, beautify poetry. Fantastical and magical! I will keep my cats fed, and contently sleeping. You get another FAV!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/29/2025 4:51:00 PM
awww, thank you for an additional fave....means a great deal to me for I value your opinion. Color me grateful! have a blessed evening, Sara
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