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Mountains Up North

Storm
                       Coming
                     Air is calm
                The skies are gray
               Winds are expected
           To create the snow drifts
            Temperature will be low
        Standing in cold to see beauty
     Preparations are done, time to wait
  This is winter in the mountains up North


Heidi Sands

1/19/19

mountainsstormwinteretheree

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/7/2021 8:43:00 AM

Heidi, I use the words of your poem to keep from wilting in the growing daylight stricken by the turn of the earth to the sun. -Richard

Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/22/2021 7:22:00 AM

Never enough mountains to climb in a life. -R

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2021 9:44:00 AM

I am happy to know my poem reaches you Richard. Thank you very much for your visits and comments :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/16/2021 10:02:00 AM

Heidi, 'Air is calm' A wonder in winter in your Etheree. What a year brings to the mountains. New storms to be weathered. -Richard

Quoth Theraven
Date: 3/20/2021 10:13:00 AM

Happy Saturday Heidi, I haven't tried the Etheree form. This one calls to me. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2021 10:39:00 AM

Yes, Richard. And we have another storm today with heavy snow causing all the branches to hang low. I hope all is well. I appreciate your visit to this poem. Thank you :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/11/2019 8:24:00 PM

I love this Heidi, a favorite! I am not familiar with this type, but it is a lovely layout. I love the build up, then you summarized it in the last line. Great one!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2021 10:38:00 AM

Hi Sandy. I just found a comment from you on an old poem of mine, that I missed. Thank you! :)

Michael Wise

Date: 1/22/2019 7:40:00 AM

As soon as I read the title, it reminded me of home back in NJ. And that put me in a very good mood. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2019 7:53:00 AM

I am happy this poem could put you in a good mood Michael. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/19/2019 3:30:00 PM

Hi Heidi, a beautiful Etheree. Your wonderful words create such beautiful imagery. Well, here in the central belt of Scotland, it is truly cold enough for the snow to come. I do love the snow. I love the image you have painted. A fave. Have a wonderful SatHugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 3:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Mike. I hope you have a wonderful Saturday too :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2019 2:17:00 PM

Your striking imagery reveals the very cold weather conditions which are expected soon, Heidi. I hope the people there are well prepared for it all! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I hope so too. I am prepared. I appreciate your comment :)