Mountains

My summit like a steeple pierces into the soft cloudy heavens
Therein an aerial view gives me unmatchable stature and grandeur
When you come down to trek through my glades and lush valleys
You unknowingly become a part of me and we merge into oneness

Come and bag all the treasures you find in my nooks and depths
I am an amalgamation of every beauteous wealth  you perceive 
They have been preserved for your hungry eyes since aeons
Not one rock, blade of grass or exotic flower I own in my name

You look forward to visiting my ranges to soothe your eyes
The serenity of my wooded heights will calm your tense nerves
My veiled waterfalls and blanketed snow peaks have enthralled
Poets and writers to laud my mountainous beauty in their fair works

In my sweet meadows you spirits will elevate and
Surge with joy at your escapades from the daily grind 
Clasp me in your arms and your lonely heart will fall in love
With the simple naturalistic pleasures, unmasked of artificiality

See how the sudden gusts find solace by resting against my shoulders
Their tears burst through veiled waterfalls flowing into gushing streams
Even loud cloud bursts fail to blemish my breathtaking acres
For everything comes back with fresher looks and our lives rejuvenate


July 12, 2016
For Julia Ward
Mountains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 12:49 PM
wow, Balveen. I can see how THIS was a winner. This is GREAT writing from you. And a belated congrats also. Marvelous personification.
Cheema Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Andrea! Probably the last I wrote a few months back.
Cheema Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Andrea! Probably the last I wrote a few months back.
Rycroft Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Congrats well written x great write x
Cheema Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Thanks for appreciating, Wendy!
A  Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Nice win, Balveen. Skat
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thanks Skat!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on your contest win...
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Janis, thanks for your kind visit and wishes! Love...
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Very lovely and well-written, Balveen. I love how your mountains spoke to us! Congratulations on your fine placement! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Sandra! I love how you always praise so sweetly and tenderly! Love, Balveen
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Wonderful words choice Balveen. I love it. Congrats on your win. :)
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:36 AM
How nice to be appreciated! Thanks Sunita! Love, Balveen
Chansarkar Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Lovely one Balveen,great personification and congrats on your placement!
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Sara for liking my personification!
Rycroft Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:35 AM
well done great poem congrats x
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Wendy, you're sweet! Thanks! Balveen
Wigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Beautifully put together, Balveen, a rich piece. Well done! Viv
Cheema Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Thank-you so very much, Viv! Loved you calling it a rich piece! Balveen
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