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Mountains

Huge mountains standing tall Guards watching over all 09/20/18

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2019 1:59:00 AM

Creative and lovely poem! Thanks for sharing. ~JWE

Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2018 8:45:00 PM

Nicely done, Jo, congratulations on your win. <3

Charles Messina

Date: 10/9/2018 4:55:00 PM

I love this Jo. Especially how it rhymes. Excellent job on this new form! Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 4:33:00 PM

love the rhyme Jo:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/9/2018 12:10:00 PM

Lovely, Jo. Congrats on your top win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2018 11:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/8/2018 9:59:00 AM

Beautiful well-written haiku! The image reminds me of the Grand Pitons of Saint Lucia in the Caribbean! Well done, dear Jo! Hugs. Pandita

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/8/2018 2:10:00 AM

Until an earthquake shivers...Beautiful message and well composed. Many kind wishes, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2018 3:12:00 PM

I like rhymed one. Mine are that way too (not posted yet) Great job.

Funom Makama

Date: 9/27/2018 12:43:00 PM

Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/20/2018 12:32:00 PM

SPLENDID haiku Jo! 1, 2, 3, a winner! I was feeling pretty confident in my little haiku before reading this ;))) this, a fave. My best to you! xomo