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Mountain Studies

Studyin' money make a man weep studyin' bout what he can't keep cause ol' Uncle Sam's been studyin' too come along and take it away from you. Studyin' bout nuthin' if you don't know how to shear a sheep or milk a cow just what good is what you know if you ain't got young'uns to show where to find a ginsing patch or how to build a fire without a match. With a head full of studyin' not a thing to make your soul to sing like makin' a banjo (ya done forgot) or whittlin' a toy for a tiny tot, and eatin' home cookin' from a garden plot. What folks is studyin' today is how to cheat on the games they play with other folks money or cheatin' on their honey who's been a meetin' another when she said she were a-studyin'. Nope, I think I'll just sit here 'n study the sky and hope the Good Lord by and by finds a moment to take me on home and someday somebody'll be studyin' my bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/4/2009 1:11:00 PM
We are definitely in a state of decay. No values, no morals. Have a great day, Sue. Vince
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Date: 3/3/2009 6:48:00 AM
Well, I've never had any money for others to screw me out of, but have done a bit of studying the sky. Yep! Us poets be dreamers, hoping somebody will study our poems, eventually our bones. Passive resistance sounds good at this point. Great write. Love, daver
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Date: 3/1/2009 6:13:00 AM
wonderful uniqueness to this piece... your creativity flowing in all the lines... lovely essence it has brought to me... good one ~ Arany
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Date: 2/28/2009 8:22:00 PM
Very creative and good ol mountain words. Great write Sue. God BLess Phyl
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Date: 2/28/2009 8:03:00 PM
Strong write Sue filled with very language..love the third stanza.. it just plays a tune..enjoyed this piece.. well done.
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:34:00 PM
I like the way this one is written. Being somewhat of a hillbilly myself I can relate. LOL! The best learnin is life learnin' LOL! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 2/28/2009 6:00:00 PM
Creative use of language in this timely poem. It works well!! So much truth in your words. Good job! Karen
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