Mountain Stream

MOUNTAIN STREAM from the high slopes these meager trickles picked up fish somewhere

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2012 12:59:00 AM

Daver, hi, I feel silly now...I was under the impression, you thought i was a guy... Well, thank you for knowing I'm all she she female, sweet kitty kitty,,, Skat~meow... thanks for always taking the time to say hi to me, when you are on line. I love your haiku,, i hate fish... excellent... xox~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2012 10:31:00 AM

Hey, I missed this one!! I really like it too. About brandy, yeah, that was so stupid of me. But I never felt sick at all. If I felt sick, I don't remember it. hahaha

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/12/2012 9:53:00 AM

so much imagery and thought in this short form of poetry. I enjoyed reading it. Sincerely, Cindy

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/10/2012 11:01:00 AM

Love this Daver! Makes me wonder now, how it cculd have "picked up fish"? Now I'll spend time trying to figure that out, when in reality, I should only be thinking how much I enjoy this piece! Love you, my guru, Mikki

James Peranteau

Date: 5/10/2012 4:40:00 AM

Great write Dave....I often wonder how them fish get in the most remote of places....like ponds deep in the woods, and what not ! One to ponder dear poet ! Have a fantastic day my friend....much love, james