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Mountain Spring

Water pure and clear From a mountain spring tumbles Wearing smooth its path Pooling in the rocky cup The doe dips her head to drink For the Wow Me in 5 Lines contest...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 4/24/2011 8:46:00 AM

many congrats : )

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/24/2011 8:42:00 AM

Congrats Barbara on your win, a lovely piece here,enjoyed it,LOve,gautami

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2011 8:13:00 AM

LOVE this one!! (I would have placed higher).....such a wonderful image it leaves in my mind. Have a wonderful Easter, Barbara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2011 12:13:00 AM

I remember this was one of my favorites of all.Congatulatons,Barbara.

John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2011 9:50:00 PM

Great to see you in the winner's circle Barbara. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/23/2011 7:25:00 PM

Very pretty scene you have painted. Congratulations on your top ten. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2011 6:49:00 PM

Wow a real beauty BG, love the images.. Congratulations to you ;)

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/23/2011 6:23:00 PM

beautiful tanka Barbara, congrats on your 9th place win in the Wow Me contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 7:33:00 PM

wow! good luck,,p.d.

Constance La France

Date: 4/21/2011 9:04:00 AM

This poem is enchanting and entrancing!I love it, so best of luck in the contest and thanks for your ever lovely comments on my poetry~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2011 11:53:00 PM

I really love this one, Barbara!! You found the perfect way to describe a pure spring by using tanka form!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/20/2011 9:49:00 AM

Where is this pristine environment? I want to move there, dear LNC. What a sight this must be to behold. Beautiful description of the mountain spring and I love envisioning the doe drinking from it. I'm catching fish. Will send you a photo. Now I can't write about anything but fish. Ah, the bliss of this addiction. Sending you winning wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/19/2011 12:55:00 PM

beautiful spring pictured in your write with images conveying the thought, Barbara