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Mountain Range

Pink skies top off the dark mountain range I wonder about wandering all the way there Just to discover a few things, I’d like to know Feel the freedom of my footsteps in the snow As if the distance has the answers and… Steps to take me closer will help me understand So much more than I can from sitting on this land The pink skies turn to lavender, as night approaches With limited time to see, so I imagine and I will dream What it will be like at the distant range that knows As it fades into darkness and the ground of white glows Heidi Sands 3/15/21

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/22/2021 12:24:00 PM

Very nicely written Heidi. The trip is worth the wandering :) Linda

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/22/2021 1:41:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda. I appreciate your kind comments :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/20/2021 12:30:00 PM

Fine penning Heidi, good imagery and nice expression too.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/20/2021 12:37:00 PM

Thank you very much Gordon. I hope all is well and you are having a nice day :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2021 4:36:00 PM

Dear Heidi, you always seem to manage to mesmerize me with your unique imagery that almost feels tangible. This poem is gorgeous! Happy St. Patrick's Day my friend. I am faving this beauty. Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2021 4:49:00 PM

Hi Connie. Thank you for being so kind to me. I am thrilled to hear your feedback and that you consider faving this. Happy St. Patrick's Day to you too, my friend. Enjoy and Blessings to you too :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/17/2021 11:05:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this beautiful poem!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thank you very much Akkina. I appreciate your kind comment, always and hope you are well :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/17/2021 8:58:00 AM

Stunning imagery, marvelous verses dearest, Heidi! Congratulations!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/16/2021 6:31:00 PM

Hi Heidi, There is lovely imagery in this well-written write. I enjoyed the read. Well done. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Alexis :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/16/2021 3:46:00 PM

Very pretty...even the darkness with the glowing white ground!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2021 12:07:00 PM

You certainly have a way of making nature scenes so appealing, Heidi. Kudos, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2021 2:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon. That is kind of you to say :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/16/2021 11:25:00 AM

Lovely poem with amazing imagery, Heidi:-) I enjoyed it!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2021 2:47:00 PM

That is nice to hear. I am happy you enjoyed it Edward. Thank you for the kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/16/2021 6:32:00 AM

You are blessed with lovely hues of nature. Delightful poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2021 6:44:00 AM

I agree , I am blessed. Thank you for your kind comment and support :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/15/2021 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful write Heidi, enjoyed

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2021 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Joseph . Happy you enjoyed it :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/15/2021 4:10:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I have always wondered what is on top of a mountain. I sense that the view would be beautiful to see. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/16/2021 10:00:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I have never been up top of the mountain to see a view. it must be amazing. Enjoy your day my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2021 4:13:00 PM

The views of the mountains and from the mountains are beautiful all around here Darlene. I hope that you enjoy your evening too. Thank you, my friend :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2021 4:10:00 PM

you had me hooked from the first line, the imagery is so beautiful Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2021 4:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan. There is a beautiful mountain range to be seen from here in winter through the trees and the sky gets to be so colorful too. I appreciate your visit and kind comment . Hugs :)