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Special thanks to a wonderful poetry pal for introducing me to the word 'pellucid' which inspired the first line of the poem, without her inspiration the poem would never have been written. Sadly like many of my friends, she is no longer active on the site

Mountain Memories

Mountains mirrored on a pellucid lake, not a cloud in the cornflower blue sky. At one with nature with each step I take, I ascend these emerald hills on high. A patchwork quilted field spreads before me, with xanthic gorse and lavender heather. I imbibe the pastoral scenes I see, thrilling views in such warm golden weather I walk on the verdant hillside for hours, admiring all the flora and fauna, taking photos of scarlet wild flowers then bask in sun like a green iguana! A sight to behold, I view at daybreak; mountains mirrored on a pellucid lake. Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dale Gregory Cozart 6/3/19
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Foster Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 10:14 PM
I needed this one... Thank you. Ann
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 1:43 AM
Your pen paints a lovely image
Kulkarni Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Very beautifully described poem Jan! Congratulations on your win! -Smita
Michael Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Lovely imagery...I've seen those long tailed iguanas before...Congratulations Jan...All the best
Leiser Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Very beautiful imagery is reflected in your lovely words, Jan! Congrats on your win! :)
Poteet Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Lovely description of the pellucid scene with additional journeys into nature. Great read, Jan.
Watson Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 3:56 PM
What a beautiful description,Jan. Did you make this journey in reality or only in the imagination? You really brought it to life anyway and I shall be definitely making use of 'pellucid' in future. An enjoyable read.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Jan, I am so happy to see this beautiful poem on the winner's list. I loved it so much I faved it, as you know. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Congrats, Jan, I'm so glad to see that your well deserving sonnet made Dale's list. All the best. John
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:34 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.
Cozart Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations on your 10th Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Y. Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Wow! Jan, I agree with Connie. You have penned such a beautiful Sonnet. Your words wrap around the photo very well. Congrats on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Oh Jan, this is gorgeous! I am so happy to see it honored with POTD! This is such a lovely tribute to nature I could smell the fresh air. This gem is going into my Faves! Have a great night! xxoo : )
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 5:44 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Jan. Pellucid is new to me too.
Proxenos Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 1:51 AM
A serene scene a a beautiful sonnet and POTD - what else could a poet want - congratulations Jan, a wonderful and much deserved honour bestowed upon you! Love and hugs, Jennifer.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Hello Jan Allison, A mountain view is so beautiful. A mountainscene to be seen from a home would be also beautiful to see. have a nice d=evening my friend.
Gondolf Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet from one who thinks she can't write sonnets! I love the imagery in this, Jan, you made me feel like I was there. Congrats on POTD. John
Trim Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 6:19 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD Jan
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Ashley Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:48 PM
I was captivated by your lush and luscious imagery, Jan. So beautiful in its vivid yet peaceful eloquence. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:15 PM
Back with congrats on POTD. Well-deserved, Jan. :) gw
Foster Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Beautiful. I believe it brought me right to the lake. It was calm and comforting to read. Ty.
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Jan:-) Congrats on POTD!
Doll Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Jan, this is a beautiful sonnet and you deserve the POTD honor. All the best~ Warren
Allison Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 3:10 AM
thanks so much Warren I'm delighted its been ages since I got POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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June 5, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Just beautiful, Jan. Could have been written about our lush mountains of Arkansas, Tennessee, etc. I really loved reading it. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Thanks so much Sunlite I am glad you can relate:-) hugs Jan xx
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