Mountain Meditation

I am walking in silence,
listen to water and wind,
notice
the frost on the leaves in the shade,
the fivefold symmetry of the columbines,
the pica scurrying across the scree.

My feet follow
the rhythm of my breath 
which, in turn, is molded
on the contour of the mountain.
My thoughts are 
of breathing and walking,
breathing and walking
until I reach the summit
and realize
I spent the morning
in meditation,
every step 
a prayer.

July 2, 2018
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Mcgee Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 8:04 AM
This was a meditation in itself while I read...lovely penning.
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 6:16 PM
So lovely, peaceful and serene, Agnes. Truly a Zen gem! Congrats on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM
I think this is a poem truly written from the heart knowing your love of climbing mountains and walking, many congrats Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Jan. I wrote the draft *while* hiking.
Marc Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Beautiful win - congratulations!
Krampe Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, PM
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 8:32 AM
"every step a prayer", love this, the whole piece. Congratulations on your top win Agnes, xomo :)
Krampe Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Maureen.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Oh this is so lovely Agnes. Congratulations on your first placement! xxoo : )
Gaul Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 9:34 PM
Authentic practice. Well done. Namaste.
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Your combination of nature and prayer-state is beautifully expressed, Agnes. Thanks for entering my contest with this top winner.
La France Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Agnes, congratulations in your top win in Brian's contest, well done !
Krampe Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Constance.
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:09 AM
wow, Agnes. Did it win in one of Brian's contests? It is so beautiful. Congratulations. (how did I ever miss this one. It seems like just the other day I was looking for a new poem of yours to comment on)
Krampe Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Yes, it was Brian's Midsummer Standard. I had quite a streak with his contests recently; I seem to be writing in a style he enjoys (now I've jinxed it)
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:22 PM
I felt like I was walking with you through this lovely imagery presented in your beautiful poem, Agnes. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Gentry Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Great imagery. :)
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Lovely, Agnes. A FAVE for me.
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, Line.
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 6:22 PM
A divine climb Agnes...beautiful words...love & light...^WW^
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thank you, ^WW^
Carber Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Quite lovely Agnes-- love the way you 'extended' yourself into nature, into the mountain even! Congrats on your much deserved win
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:02 PM
Thank you, LJ.
Smith Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 11:07 AM
This is beautiful Agnes, you have a tender soul...
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
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July 4, 2018 at 10:12 AM
This is truly beautiful and inspiring Agnes.A pure pleasure to read. Thank you.
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 5:57 PM
thank you for your visit, Sylvia.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Back with congratulations Agnes! :) xomo
Onclaud Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 11:00 AM
so in touch with self.. this really spoke to me, agnes.. what a beauty!..huggs
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, nette.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 7:49 AM
This one creates a warm fuzzy feeling :) xomo
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Thank you, Maureen.
Man Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Hi Agnes.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!
Cunningham Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 5:13 PM
A beautiful verse Agnes, nothing more peaceful than to be alone on a mountain at one with nature that is a wonder of nature. Tom.
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