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Alone and weary ... she dangled toes o'er the mountain ledge - the late-October night was clear and bitter cold, yet as still as death ... rare were such even-tides when not a breath of keen altitude moved among the peaks. Far below, thru brumal wisps the tribal lights shimmered in warmth drums of ceremony echoing like All-Hallows heartbeats ... a lone conch-shell horn moaned woefully, and somewhere a wolf answered. The harvest moon swam thru the bright Milky Way wash like a silver doubloon ... swallowing stars in its wan gullet and transfiguring the sharp-shard ridges to proud porcelain gods arms stretching heavenward. She had made this calm-but-keen sojourn countless times each late fall, in careful anticipation of this very night ... but never before had an evening trembled so tenderly or shone as bright and bloodless. Life had been full ... with loves and adventures and aches but she longed for rest and sleep ... the bare, lonely mountains of ancient autumn and crisp, dead leaves hushed it to her - the prayer of welcome ... the prayer of poignant endings. She smiled at the thought of those she loved, now left behind her heart swelling with a sad, soulful contentment. As her people's farewell chant rose faint sweet with the smoke from campfires, far below she breathed, deep and dear the magnificent night ... And stepped softly ... off the edge. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Fall Into Fall" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/24/2019 1:10:00 PM
- A beautiful winning poem, Gregory ... congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 9/23/2019 1:09:00 PM
A beautiful story of endings. Congrats on your win Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jeanne! :o)
Date: 9/23/2019 11:41:00 AM
Dark yet such beautiful visions. Congrats, well deserved.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:53:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, DM - blessings! :o)
Date: 9/23/2019 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations and this is beautiful... I'm favoriting it so I can come back to it again and again. God bless you
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Regina! :o) <3
Date: 9/18/2019 5:45:00 PM
Some how I just knew it would end like that, my you are in a gloomy mood today people falling or jumping off cliffs, gotta lighten it up I'm getting depressed! lol! Great write G, you KNOW I can't just leave you hanging...right!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/21/2019 4:02:00 PM
Not a big Fantasy crowd here, I guess ... I feel a HARD science fiction piece coming on!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/21/2019 4:01:00 PM
Ha! Totally, John, lol ... I DO get in moods, that's for sure, ironic thing as that USUALLY when I write dark or depressing stuff I'm in a GOOD mood, and write the cheery stuff when I'm down ... just a contrary, ambiguous creature, I guess. Then again, most humans are, I think! Blessings and thanks, Brother - this one was a LOT of fun - figures it would only have one comment, lol. ;o)

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