Mountain Majesty

On the western horizon where the sun goes to bed,
there stands the Canadian Rockies,
so majestic in size,
solid and immovable,
yet fluid and ever-changing.

I am awed by their beauty,
the way the sun reflects off the snow,
making them seem closer than they really are,
a three-dimensional monolith sitting in my own backyard,
sometimes shrouded in clouds,
or resting under the halo of the sun,
while their crevasses hide in the shadows.

At times a mist covers their peaks,
and they are subdued,
as if a veil has been pulled across the landscape,
making them seem distant and one-dimensional,
a flat backdrop at the edge of a rolling prairie.

And as the sun sets beyond this mighty fortress of rock,
painting a canvass of red, pink and orange,
the mountains sit in silhouette,
dark and foreboding,
as if hiding a secret deep within their walls.

Spring now gently invades this frozen rock,
and as the snow melts,
the hillsides turn green,
and palettes of colour dot the meadows.

The mountains are alive with movement,
new birth,
struggles for survival,
and death.

The cycle of life is being played out in their bosom,
yet from a distance,
as I survey their silent grandeur,
they appear to be indifferent to the drama taking place within.

Spring becomes summer,
penetrating much of this rugged world,
but the highest peak is buried in ice year-round,
a giant glacier,
the birthplace of mighty rivers.

I have stood on that glacier,
drank from its cold, clear waters,
as they cascade down the ice,
water so pure,
as if the world is new,
and being touched for the very first time,
a frozen paradise,
a fragile cradle of microscopic life.

I love these mountains,
for their beauty never tires,
and I am content to live in their shadows.

*For the Love Of Nature contest*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/12/2017 8:04:00 AM
With this descriptive poem you made me homesick for Banff where I once lived so long ago. Wonderful images David and good luck.
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Date: 4/6/2017 5:27:00 PM
Lived along the rockies in many places, in love with Wyoming, Montana, Idaho, and Colorado. Thanks for this.
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Date: 3/14/2017 11:09:00 PM
David my darlin' friend this is absolutely breathtaking! Thank you for the lovely descriptive write you have so beautifully shared with us here of the mountains you hold so dear to your heart...:).A '7' from this country girl tonight. :)...Mary
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Date: 3/14/2017 1:32:00 PM
Breathtaking scene. Thanks for this picturesque poem!
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Date: 3/14/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Susan. It's much better to see the Rockies in person.
Date: 3/13/2017 7:56:00 PM
aah...so beautiful...home. you are speaking my language. Whenever I travel (usually tropical) :-) what I miss the most is our Canadian mountains. They are so awe inspiring and regal.. this is a gorgeous tribute a special fave, 7+ Exquisite writing. blessings, lynn
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David Pekrul
Date: 3/14/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thanks Lynn. It's always nice to come back to the mountains after a trip overseas. I must admit that the only place I hated to leave was when I visited Tahiti. They also have tall mountains, but totally different from Alberta's.
Date: 3/13/2017 2:27:00 PM
Thank you for bringing these faraway majestic mountains closer to us. You certainly brought them to life.
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Date: 3/13/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Marie. I never get tired of looking at them.
Date: 3/13/2017 12:45:00 PM
The mountains west of my childhood home were not as tall or with snow as yours, but most of this poem speaks to the beauty of them. I loved reading this beautiful tribute.
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Date: 3/13/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, I only live a hour's drive from the mountains, but don't get into them that often, but what a beautiful view from my home.
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