Mountain Magic

Mountains rise far above valleys below
As shadows morph into morning's hued light
Celestial shades cause mountains to glow.
Out of marauding mist birds soon take flight.

Menehune folk are known to abide
In mountain ranges or forests, they keep
Away from all humans, they seek to hide,
Live off 'aina with bananas they reap.

A divine essence floats through tropic air. 
Hawaiian night marchers of past up high
Still chant along cliffs with torches, beware
To let them be if you don't want to die.

Most kama'ainas respect island lore
With many legends they tend to adore.


5-14-19

*Menehune are a dwarf people in Hawaiian tradition who live in the mountains, deep forests and hidden valleys of the Hawaiian Islands, far from the eyes of normal humans. The Menehune were said to be craftspeople. Legends say that the Menehune built temples (heiau), fishponds, roads, canoes, and houses.

*Hawaiian Night Marchers:
According to Hawaiian legend, night marchers (huaka‘i po in Hawaiian) are ghosts of ancient warriors. They supposedly roam large sections of the island chain, and can be seen by groups of torches. 
What to do when happening upon a night march in progress? The ghostly procession must never be interrupted. Legend has it that resting your eyes upon the Night Marchers could signal a grim fate for the perpetrator, a friend or relative, so witnesses are urged to crouch low to the ground, "play dead" and avert the eyes. Any sound or movement could invite a Night Marcher's deadly glance. These Night Marchers are set diligently upon their destination and are not considered spirits that will deviate from their path to haunt humans nearby.

*kama'ainas are Hawaiian native born  equivalent to kama child, person + 'aina land, earth

* 'aina land, earth

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Date: 10/2/2020 10:13:00 AM
Connie, this is a fascinating account of island lore, and beautifully written. Thank you for including the supplementary information. You are such a lovely sonnet writer and a knowledgeable proponent of all things Hawaiian! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 6/7/2019 1:32:00 AM
Lots of information; wow! And a sweet poem in honor of all of it. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/30/2019 11:34:00 PM
G'day Connie … well written and informative. Like most nations, we too have the unseen handed down in folklore. Bunyips, Yetis; and a host of indigenous beliefs that are really interesting - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 5/30/2019 6:03:00 PM
When one considers that you get what you wish for; it might be best to respect other's lore. Well penned piece, just beautiful.
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Date: 5/29/2019 10:16:00 AM
This is so interesting and imparts a mysterious aura. Love the imagery it conveys.
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Date: 5/27/2019 2:39:00 PM
wow, love this magical write - very interesting footnotes too
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Date: 5/27/2019 1:19:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem and the bit of history. love phyl
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Date: 5/27/2019 9:50:00 AM
Sounds like Hawaii to me.. Loved the imagery. I can see your love for your island from your words...
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Date: 5/26/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments on my winning poem. A Remembered Day was posted 9/27/2011. I enjoyed your poem and those little people I have never heard of before. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2019 2:06:00 PM
What a beautiful flow of imagery and sheer poetic sonnet joy this poem is. I think it a great poem, truly inspiring lines wrapping up content as a sonnet should. Great, yes, I must say great again, great writing, Connie!!!!! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 5/25/2019 6:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Connie.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/25/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thank you Line. : )
Date: 5/25/2019 5:15:00 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Connie, that offers so much knowledge along with your well-written poem! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/25/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra. I have seen the torch flames on the mountainside where there are no roads. : )
Date: 5/25/2019 7:04:00 AM
These Kama'ainas sound a little familiar in ways...it must be true...there maybe a bit in me and you...All the best Connie...it was nice to learn about them...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/25/2019 7:53:00 PM
My husband is part Hawaiian and he has taught me a lot about the legends here. Thank you. : )
Date: 5/24/2019 7:05:00 PM
wow, Connie, what an interesting and informative sonnet you wrote. Congrats. I'm so happy to see your name on this list.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/24/2019 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Almost didn't finish my entry in time. It was the last one entered before he closed the contest. I am happy to be on the list with you. I have seen the torch lights on the mountainside at night where no roads lead to. xxoo : )
Date: 5/24/2019 5:12:00 PM
Nicely done! Congratulations! Aloha! Rico
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/24/2019 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Rico. There are no explanations for the torch lights seen on the mountain side where there are no roads, except for the night marchers. : )
Date: 5/24/2019 12:49:00 PM
CONGRATS Connie. I am touched with your wonderful poem. Love.
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Date: 5/24/2019 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations Connie on your win in the contest . Love tradition, but will never tempt fate, certainly respect every nations ethos - a very informative write - I have always been fascinated with the island of Hawaii . Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/24/2019 7:13:00 AM
I enjoyed the read Connie--and from the comment below I note that you won in the contest..Congrats!
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Date: 5/24/2019 6:48:00 AM
My heartfelt thanks with no end, for your participation Connie, CHEERS indeed for your placement in the Epic Ethereal Editor Contest, Aloha William Kekaula
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement in your contest WK. I am honored to be on your winning list. Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo
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