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Mountain House

Alone with our love on a quiet retreat
In a mountain lake cabin, no one else there to greet
Reachable only by an airplane on floats
Hidden from view in a place so remote
That only one chair could be brought to the door
Together we're on it experiencing more
Sharing a moment of corporal bliss 
That started with hugging and one little kiss
My hair is a handle for you to hold on
Unstyled and wild all control is now gone
While you there my dear are a porcelain doll
Held in my arms, of you I'm enthralled
The day turns to night then the night turns to day
A painting by Klimt, living art on display

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/4/2023 4:51:00 AM
What a beautiful image.
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Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 5/4/2023 6:25:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/4/2023 3:05:00 AM
Andres, you bring to life for me, 'The Kiss' of Klimt. My wish has always been to live in the scene you've painted within your lines. I've appreciation for your poetry.
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 3:16:00 AM
Welcome
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Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 5/4/2023 3:08:00 AM
Thank you

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