Mountain House

Alone with our love on a quiet retreat
In a mountain lake cabin, no one else there to greet
Reachable only by an airplane on floats
Hidden from view in a place so remote
That only one chair could be brought to the door
Together we're on it experiencing more
Sharing a moment of corporal bliss 
That started with hugging and one little kiss
My hair is a handle for you to hold on
Unstyled and wild all control is now gone
While you there my dear are a porcelain doll
Held in my arms, of you I'm enthralled
The day turns to night then the night turns to day
A painting by Klimt, living art on display
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Grace Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 4:51 AM
What a beautiful image.
Bigote Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Thank you
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:05 AM
Andres, you bring to life for me, 'The Kiss' of Klimt. My wish has always been to live in the scene you've painted within your lines. I've appreciation for your poetry.
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Welcome
Bigote Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Thank you
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