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Mount Fuji - Haikuette

Mount Fuji white-capped monolith silent, silver sentinel... a sleeping beauty Form - Haikuette 05-31-2014 Contest: Three Lines are Fine Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Placement: 2nd

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Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 11:18:00 PM

Wow, Pandita this is such a lovely haiku - beautifully penned! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 11:45:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kika for your wonderful compliments! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:01:00 AM

thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:06:00 PM

Pandita, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2014 10:52:00 PM

Thank you again, my friend for your kind compliment!

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:00:00 AM

PANDITA,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2014 9:59:00 AM

Thanks very much, SKAT, for the great compliments and encouragement!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/2/2014 8:18:00 AM

Very beautiful poem my friend! Congrats on the win!!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 8:27:00 AM

Thank you very much, my friend. Kindest regards!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/2/2014 6:52:00 AM

beautiful poem Pandita congrats on win hugs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Shadow! Regards!

Kiran Bantawa

Date: 6/2/2014 6:33:00 AM

congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 7:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kiran! Regards.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/1/2014 11:38:00 AM

Wonderful write Pandita ! Congrats on well deserved great win !

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/1/2014 2:18:00 PM

Dr. Upma, many thanks for your kind comments. Best regards.

Joseph May

Date: 6/1/2014 9:27:00 AM

Beautiful write...congrats on the win

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/1/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Joseph. I appreciate your kind compliment!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/1/2014 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Pandita. Mt. Fuji is spelled with 'j' and not 'g' if it is the Japanese one. But it does not take away anything from the nice poem. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/1/2014 9:21:00 AM

Mohan, thank you so very much for your kind comments and for bringing the typo to my attention. I have corrected that! Thanks again!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2014 1:50:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/1/2014 12:14:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much. I do appreciate your comments!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2014 11:29:00 PM

WOW, now THIS is one of my favorites in the whole contest. Congrats for your win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/1/2014 12:21:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much. I do appreciate your kind comments!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/31/2014 8:51:00 PM

Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/31/2014 10:33:00 PM

Hi Joyce, I greatly appreciate your kind comments. Thanks so much!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/21/2014 8:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Barbara. While this form is similar to the Haiku,each line must be a separate entity, yet must contribute to the whole; it should have 17 syllables or less; there is no specified syllable count per line, written without verbs, and it is unrhymed.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/20/2014 9:53:00 PM

Very nice. First time ive seen this form..BG

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/21/2014 9:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Barbara. I learned that while this form is similar to the Haiku,each line must be a separate entity, yet must contribute to the whole; it should have 17 syllables or less; there is no specified syllable count per line, written without verbs, and it is unrhymed.