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Mount Fuji - Haikuette

Mount Fuji


white-capped monolith
silent, silver sentinel...
a sleeping beauty


Form - Haikuette

05-31-2014

Contest:    Three Lines are Fine
Sponsor:    Debbie Guzzi
Placement: 2nd

Copyright © Pandita Sietesantos | Year Posted 2014

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Kika Ayala Date: 8/29/2014 11:18:00 PM Wow, Pandita this is such a lovely haiku - beautifully penned! Kika Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 8/29/2014 11:45:00 PM Thank you very much, Kika for your wonderful compliments! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/9/2014 8:01:00 AM thank you for the reply Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/8/2014 8:06:00 PM Pandita, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/8/2014 10:52:00 PM Thank you again, my friend for your kind compliment!

Skat A Date: 6/8/2014 8:00:00 AM PANDITA,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/8/2014 9:59:00 AM Thanks very much, SKAT, for the great compliments and encouragement!

Robert Lindley Date: 6/2/2014 8:18:00 AM Very beautiful poem my friend! Congrats on the win!!! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/2/2014 8:27:00 AM Thank you very much, my friend. Kindest regards!

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/2/2014 6:52:00 AM beautiful poem Pandita congrats on win hugs Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/2/2014 7:48:00 AM Thank you so very much, Shadow! Regards!

Kiran Bantawa Date: 6/2/2014 6:33:00 AM congrats on your win! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/2/2014 7:48:00 AM Thank you very much, Kiran! Regards.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/1/2014 11:38:00 AM Wonderful write Pandita ! Congrats on well deserved great win ! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/1/2014 2:18:00 PM Dr. Upma, many thanks for your kind comments. Best regards.

Joseph May Date: 6/1/2014 9:27:00 AM Beautiful write...congrats on the win Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/1/2014 11:10:00 AM Thank you so very much, Joseph. I appreciate your kind compliment!

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/1/2014 8:28:00 AM Congratulations on the win Pandita. Mt. Fuji is spelled with 'j' and not 'g' if it is the Japanese one. But it does not take away anything from the nice poem. Mohan Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/1/2014 9:21:00 AM Mohan, thank you so very much for your kind comments and for bringing the typo to my attention. I have corrected that! Thanks again!

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/1/2014 1:50:00 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, Pandita Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/1/2014 12:14:00 AM Hi Andrea, thank you so much. I do appreciate your comments! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/31/2014 11:29:00 PM WOW, now THIS is one of my favorites in the whole contest. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/1/2014 12:21:00 AM Hi Andrea, thank you so much. I do appreciate your kind comments!

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/31/2014 8:51:00 PM Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/31/2014 10:33:00 PM Hi Joyce, I greatly appreciate your kind comments. Thanks so much!

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/21/2014 8:11:00 AM Thank you so much, Barbara. While this form is similar to the Haiku,each line must be a separate entity, yet must contribute to the whole; it should have 17 syllables or less; there is no specified syllable count per line, written without verbs, and it is unrhymed. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/20/2014 9:53:00 PM Very nice. First time ive seen this form..BG Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/21/2014 9:01:00 AM Thank you so much, Barbara. I learned that while this form is similar to the Haiku,each line must be a separate entity, yet must contribute to the whole; it should have 17 syllables or less; there is no specified syllable count per line, written without verbs, and it is unrhymed.