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Mount Etna

Orange streaks highlight an eastern Sicilian sky a fiery display putting added pressure on an already muddled and ashen mind seeing the unseen still fearing the fairest dream Slight breezes push a scent of despair to the front fading slow where the swirls of yesterday still comfort me but I worry that you can only see with barren eyes under a paper umbrella giving broken perceptions Mount Etna don't you cry out loud for me tonight hold back your molten seas as life gives way to thoughts lost on a quick spin through the storm where hearts sway with anticipation of her Futures lie deep in the painted heat of the night even now, eased, knowing you're finally alright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/5/2017 5:34:00 AM
What a creative take on this Sicilian volcano, Tim! As Charma said...metaphorically beautiful. // paul
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Date: 3/1/2017 10:00:00 AM
Metaphorically beautiful...I loved the way you used the eruption of Etna to show emotions in this poem..I've went to Sicily many times..but so far hadnt had time to visit Etna..Hubby did...Its on my bucket -list...
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Date: 3/1/2017 8:14:00 AM
That is one powerful comparison to so many things really, that I do not even know where to start... Love, pain, both psychological and physical. How you always use imagery, your wonderful metaphors... phew, awed :)
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Date: 3/1/2017 7:44:00 AM
The roars of Mount Etna's volcano reverberate through the millennia and their echo are still heard today dear, Tim! Your thunderous poem adds beauty and awe to it! A seven!
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Date: 2/28/2017 9:44:00 PM
Seen that bad boy, not real active when we saw it, just some harmless white smoke. Good write Tim
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Date: 2/28/2017 7:22:00 PM
A powerful poem Tim. I love the way you use the volcano in this <3
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Date: 2/28/2017 6:26:00 PM
Everybody pressures up at some point, better to let it out:) Great write, Tim!
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:25:00 PM
Volcanos are frightening and the devastation they devour not a sight I want to see.. I was living near Mount St. Helens when it flew... ash all over everything... beautiful write
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:12:00 PM
Beautifully done Tim. I love how you used the volcano as a metaphor for love overflowing.
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Date: 2/28/2017 4:18:00 PM
love the romance in the piece Tim especially the final couplet:-) Am going to Pompeii later in the year - always been my dream to see it for real not just on tv:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2017 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful prose Tim!!
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