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Motifs of Nightfall

Eventide’s splendorous motifs on blazing arc rise Tinting golden horizon of glinting vermillion skies Where setting sun inflames decaying gilded rays As twilight glistens graying eve’s yellowing haze And pewter winds rustle leaves, lilting meadows Swaying hills of trees in rhythms of tilting shadows Where bidding the day goodbye birds hastily fly While enchanted in luminant sky people amble by Reveling ebullience of nightfall glowing in moonlight Dazzled by twinkles of stars lifting tenor of night As nightingale’s love song enthralls nocturnal appeal When orchestra plays above scintillating astral zeal Quietude soon endows dreams of exuberant dawn As the reign of moon and stars sparkles on and on Till misty morn awakens to melodies of robin’s call And sun rises again to walk the new day to nightfall October 19, 2020 Placed 2nd: Collaboration with Silent One Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/11/2022 9:58:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration. Someone enjoys night and dawn!! Peace, healing, write on --
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Date: 3/5/2022 8:30:00 AM
What a beautiful melange of sounds and scenes at eventide. The setting sun, the colorful sky, the twilight and the shroud of darkness....then the astral scenes of moon and stars in array and to top it all the song of the nightingale... simply heavenly !
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Date: 10/24/2020 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful journey from sunset to sunrise, Vijay. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2020 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 10/21/2020 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, love your imagery in your poem. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2020 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Date: 10/21/2020 1:00:00 PM
Nice use of words as always Vijay, a great response to my poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2020 6:25:00 AM
Much appreciate SO--many thanks.
Date: 10/21/2020 2:34:00 AM
This is a brilliant poem, Vijay, a sure winner for me, no one can beat your vocabulary and beautiful imagery:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2020 5:59:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks, Jo.
Date: 10/20/2020 8:18:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Your vocabulary in your poems, amazing too! Well done :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 10:45:00 AM
That is so nice to hear--much appreciate Heidi--many thanks.
Date: 10/20/2020 7:53:00 AM
I don't know how I missed this one, Vijay. A beautiful word-painting you have. My favorite part, "Quietude soon endows dreams of exuberant dawn" :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Date: 10/20/2020 6:55:00 AM
Tinting, glinting, lilting, tilting... Wow I just love the rhymes of of course the imagery. This is absolutely beautiful!!! Loved it...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.
Date: 10/19/2020 8:45:00 PM
You paint such vivid images with your words. "Dazzled by twinkles of stars" I love everything about this thought. I am wrapping it softly around me. This is beautiful, dreamy and magical- all at the same time. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:37:00 AM
A wonderful start to my day to read your comments my friend. Much appreciate the kind remarks. Many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 10/19/2020 3:30:00 PM
Outstanding write Vijay, it's impossible but how does each write of your surpass the previous one? Reaching heights that few do, another fave, just amazing!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:36:00 AM
So special to read your wonderful feedback, John. I truly value your opinion. Much appreciate your visit....many many thanks. I am honored by your FAVE.
Date: 10/19/2020 11:31:00 AM
Poetry painted in a set of templates that moves from dusk to dawn, imagery so phenomenal, vocabulary of great significance that shows your master of poetry. ~~
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:33:00 AM
Much appreciate your compliments, Victor--always a delight to read your comments. Many thanks.
Date: 10/19/2020 10:21:00 AM
An amazing write Vijay with stunning imagery. You certainly rose to the challenge. Good luck Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:31:00 AM
So very kind of you Tom. Much appreciate your comments--many many thanks.
Date: 10/19/2020 9:22:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, You’ve penned a good response to Silent One’s poem. Your content, rhymes and imagery is amazing! Best wishes in the in the contest.Well done my friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thank you my find for your glowing remarks. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate your visit, as always.

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