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Mother's Vacation

Mother’s Vacation 

1946 the warmest May ever in Norway, mother went camping 
with her lover on an island. I was 8 and could boil potatoes and 
look after myself, but evenings that had no darkness was long, 
and this was before TV. A big war had just ended; mother was 
free to be young. I was reading a travel book “Argentina” when 
mother came back a bit earlier than planned, she looked radiant
and sun tanned. She spoke excitedly about fishing for crabs at 
midnight boiling and eating them warm. I think she came home
 feeling guilty for leaving. When she had spoken I continued to 
read the book about the pampas of Argentine. She could not bring 
herself to say she had missed me, and I was unable to tell her how 
 much I missed her... Next morning she went back to the island and 
I boiled potatoes and ate them with tinned sardines and continued 
to read books about great adventures.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/29/2012 7:54:00 AM
Thank God for Argentina for lonely boys.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/29/2012 9:09:00 AM
yes, I wanted to go there, the nearest was Buenos Aires, and not the pampas
Date: 5/28/2012 9:33:00 AM
this is very touching. i can picture the 8 year old child (you?) and how he felt both grown-up and lonely being left by himself. i enjoyed this poem very much...
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/28/2012 11:42:00 AM
thank you iLene

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