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Mother's Love

mother, soft your love like pure rain drops from heaven wet slobbery kiss… Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Third Place Winner ~ "Senryu fo Mom” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Francine Roberts May 24, 2011

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 1:20:00 AM

Many congrats Caryl for coveted 3rd place in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2011 1:17:00 PM

Creative win..Congrats..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:50:00 PM

Many congrats Caryl!!! greatr write and win...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/4/2011 1:33:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win, Caryl : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations Caryl on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 11:54:00 AM

Caryl, Great to see you near the top again. Congratulations on your third place with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/4/2011 11:53:00 AM

Caryl, congratulations on your win in Francine's contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Caryl

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2011 2:44:00 AM

Congrats Caryl on your win-kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 11:29:00 PM

CUTE. and congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 10:48:00 PM

oops. caryl! it was carol before you...:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 10:47:00 PM

superb piece for the occasion carol.. my best cheers go to you!:) hugggs, nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/3/2011 8:50:00 PM

So sweet. Many warm congrats for this win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/3/2011 5:58:00 PM

This one makes me smile!!! Congratulations, Caryl !!

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/3/2011 5:36:00 PM

congrats on your third place win, just enough humor to score those bonus points Caryl, a senryu as it should be

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 4/27/2011 1:21:00 PM

OH SO TRUE!!! gotta love love those mommy kisse, because there's none like'em... Loved it...and thanks for your comment on 'god's coloring book' it was pure art for me! Love, Randa p.s. good luck in the contest!!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/26/2011 8:22:00 AM

Love it Caryl.Excellent--kash

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/25/2011 7:55:00 PM

thank you for entering my contest Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2011 3:53:00 PM

oh, what a GREAT senryu. really cute.