Mother's Crown of Pink

My mother’s hair hung thick and to her waist.
But seldom did she wear it in that way,
for always in a bun she had it placed
til it was loosed and on her pillow lay.

She sometimes tells me how I'd kidded her.
When I was small, I said, “Your hair is pink!”
From how she tells this story, I infer
I must have caused her tender heart to sink.

She aged, yet grey was sparse upon her head.
We said, “An older woman cuts her hair.”
Mom acquiesced and lost those locks rare red
she’d humbly worn for years when young and fair.

She’s nearly eighty now, bobbed hair turned brown,
And how I miss her once “pink” glory crown.

By Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/10/2020 11:03:00 AM
This is such a touching memory of your mother's lovely tresses and your childish innocence. Wonderfully rendered nostalgic write. I love the word 'acquiesced'! A very late congrats for a long ago win, my friend.
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Date: 11/12/2014 9:05:00 PM
Oh I love this one Andrea. This really tickles my fancy. There is a warmth and tenderness that touches the heart. It is also a very creative very intelligent write.
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Date: 6/21/2014 8:23:00 AM
What a wonderful poem and story to share, Andrea. A can feel a strong love for your mother in this one. Another great sonnet.... Robert.
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest,Andrea.....Keep flying ...Awesome write...
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Date: 4/6/2012 11:52:00 AM
A lovely write about your mother, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:44:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in P.D's "Mothers day" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:18:00 PM
Lovely tribute, Andrea. you are so lucky to still have her. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:59:00 PM
ANDREA,, Congratulations with your beautiful and heart touching mother'' poem. thank you for supporting my contest*. Have yourself a good night. It was an honor having your poem in my contest, luv~PD
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:08:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a tremendous write and win for Mother contest.. such a joy to have her in your life to enjoy today.. so special are these words luv..
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Date: 4/3/2012 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Outstanding write. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 2/3/2011 8:02:00 AM
My God!I clicked blindly and see today also I opened the first poem that is about your mom!You must tell me about her!Touching poem-kashinath
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Date: 4/5/2010 9:34:00 PM
Congrats for the win. A fine pen picture
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:14:00 PM
I so loved this piece when I first saw it! Congratulations Andrea on your win!!! Love, Carrie ps...a great blog you have also posted...I'm waiting to see what's up with #3!!
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Date: 4/5/2010 6:16:00 AM
Congrats dear friend Andrea on your winning poem and placement in Debbie's contest.. I loved it the first time I read it and just knew it had winning ways attached to this brilliant write.. enjoy your special victory and trip to the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/4/2010 12:50:00 PM
Yes . . . makes me think of my mother who was all of 4 foot 11, 100 pounds, with a size 6 AAA shoe. I too remember my dear mother. Thanks for the memories.
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:52:00 PM
OK .. I have tagged u Andrea and refer to my last posted poem Easter Egg Express.. and continue the tag ... Charma tagged me and now I am tagging u ... enjoy and have fun... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:25:00 PM
So touching to still remember those vibrant years of a mother dear, a lovely read, Andrea. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 4/2/2010 6:07:00 PM
Oh! yea good luck on the contest.
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Date: 4/2/2010 6:05:00 PM
Tender here! I enjoyed this very nice image you have stored Andrea. Thanks.
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Date: 4/2/2010 4:31:00 PM
thats sweet.it's beautiful and so cute(: that is nice that she is still here with her "brown" hair. very nice memory.it's gentle in a way, or should i say touching. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/2/2010 2:03:00 PM
Andrea, I can see from this beautiful and touching poem that you have fond memories of your family. I love what you have written here, it is one that I will read again and again. Thank you As ALways, Shar
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:07:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on my 9/11 3rd place. I am eager to read those poems. I am sure there was a lot of emotion. You mom must have looked like mine. She had never cut her hair and it was chestnut red. When my sister-in-law suggested she cut it I objected mightily and Mom didn't really want to. My dad was so proud of her hair. Lvoe, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2010 12:34:00 PM
SOUP MAIL...luv..
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Date: 4/2/2010 12:33:00 PM
Bravo .. such a fitting tribute to your Mom and a great entry for Deb's contest.. good luck with this lovely Sonnet from the "Queen" of the Sonnet.. dear friend.. nice to still have her in your life .. miss mine so very much... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:56:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thank you for your comment!...And my congratulations to your win! Will send you some receipes, depending on what you prefer when I got your email address. Love, Gert
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