Premiere Contest WinnerMother Said

She seeks her enlightenment with hunger like a wolf 
Trapped in a sacred bubble shrinking with licked wounds
Pushing out the people once vital now twice pierced 
With the absence of the presence and the love now just a breadth 

Of the time she spent asking mother am I empty? 
Fill my spirit forthright with the love I thought I dreamt 
For this life is temporary and the time is scarce 
And all I dare to do is take your eyes and gouge 

Trying to remove your truth and glean mine obliged
You will not waver and even blind I feel the warmth 
I will stop you with my fear and my anger and my prompts 
How dare you love me wrongly as we live in different worlds 

Mother do you love me; are you gone and now an angel?
I am never gone my dear though you thought me a monster
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mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 3:13 AM
powerful write, congratulations dear poet.
Miller Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 7:35 AM
What a super poem, congratulations
Stein Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Terry!
Croft Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 6:37 AM
congratulations on your win with this fantastic poem
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Stein Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Thank you Sara!
Richards Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 12:51 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this outstanding Blank Verse, Wendy. If it were true to iambic metre, you would have had a perfect Blank Verse sonnet. You teased out the very essence of the contest brief and delivered a poignant poem. Regards, Suzette
Stein Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Thank you so much Suzette! It was a fabulous challenge and excellent creative endeavour. Best Wendy
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