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Mother Oak

You’ve always been the quiet wind, Filling our sails on the sea of life. The silent rock of our family, That eased our pain and strife. Your heart beats the drum dance; The four corners of the wind. Wife of the late Wimpy Edmonds, A devoted mother and friend. She has stitched on life’s pattern, Of our family’s quilt with love. With gentle and caring hands, She sewed her qualities thereof. And in the loom of family, She’s the stitch that’s kept us together. She’s our divine sinew of life, Stronger than a raw piece of leather. She’s persevered the winds of life, With her strong but silent hope. She’s endured the winds of time, As immovable Mother Oak. _____________________________ Dedicated to Genevieve Edmonds, Wife of the late Wimpy Edmonds.

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Date: 2/3/2009 2:28:00 AM
NICE TRIBUTE RAUL..............DANIELLE
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Date: 2/2/2009 6:04:00 PM
Excellent title and poem, full of great imagery, you work is a joy to read............very nice
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Date: 2/1/2009 12:36:00 AM
Yes, that describes my mother very well. Thank you for the tribute, it means a lot to me, she loved it.
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Date: 1/28/2009 4:20:00 AM
Nice Dedication, I Know She Will Enjoy It. Tyler
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Date: 1/26/2009 3:55:00 PM
A wonderful tribute and an excellent slice of poetry. Loved the third Stanza - very imaginative and great use of personification. Peace always, John
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Date: 1/22/2009 4:11:00 PM
this is a good piece of work. Keep writing. Love ELizabeth
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Date: 1/22/2009 12:15:00 PM
Wonderful tribute. Beautiful poem. You enrich the lives of others by using your talent to touch their hearts. You have a gift. Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:16:00 AM
As you can see I am reading ur work Very good stuff :) I love the imagery
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:01:00 AM
Nice poem, great use of imagery and strong descriptions. DN
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Date: 1/21/2009 3:43:00 PM
Powerful tribute to someone who sounds like a truly strong and amazing lady. Wonderful write. Love, Shar
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