Mother Nature's Moodswings

Nature smiles in Spring
Pulls at our heart string
as greenery's hued in greener tinge
Having had an everlasting effect
on those evergreen trees. 

Nature frowns in Autumn
gets all bored, pale and blue in the fall
Almost seems to sigh drily, wryly
Looks dull and drab
except for the windy breeze. 

And this very mother nature
in full-blown winter
gives all the cold shoulder
Reveals her cold-hearted side
Could'st turn into a cold-blooded murderer
Even her nature lovers get cold feet
Besides, the winter sun is cold comfort .
A time for a A-tishoo in your tissue
a time for the noisy sneeze
Oh! Beware her icy glare, in the cold war
as she coerces all to freeze! 

Ah, in summer, nature boils and goes into a 'heated debate'
What with the burning sun and its scorching torment
Ah, she can be hot-tempered this mother nature
But let the sweltered ones bathe in the seven seas
and opt for sundaes instead of steaming teas. 

And if you really wish to see
mother nature fuming in fury
Behold it in thunderstorm and hurricane
You crouched safely behind the window pane
For she might storm at you quite violently
Watch out! She could get real stormy
Better stay out of her way at such times please! 

And hee hee I do hope yah like
my seasoned seasonal pun
It's fine here to have
some fair weather fun
And take mom Nature's pic as she says cheese! 

Yet the point here, she's created as are all mothers
implying God, not she herself could have made all of these
And so like all God's creatures who have free will
she's fallible and perhaps at times free to do as she please.  
(Though some bad weather conditions can be due to human pollution in repercussion.)

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Date: 7/1/2023 10:04:00 AM
I like your smooth, flowing lines and rhymes along with the words so powerful and tender... Really great work :)
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Date: 3/13/2023 11:14:00 AM
Hello S. Zaynab, Mother nature is unpredictable with weather in winter. We had blowing snow, followed by freezing rain. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 12/17/2022 3:13:00 PM
A very colorful and uplifting fun read. Love the lightheartedness of this.
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Date: 12/8/2022 12:25:00 PM
they say there are reasons for the seasons and you have certainly line by line achieved that....loved it
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Date: 9/28/2022 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved POTD! Robert
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/23/2022 12:36:00 PM
Thanks soo much for a great nice comment and congrats wishes poet!
Date: 9/15/2022 8:07:00 AM
behold the thunderstorm... oh yes... I love them and they scare me... all at the same time. Wonderful words, wonderful write... Ann
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Date: 10/23/2022 12:35:00 PM
Yeah thunderstorms can be scary while other weather is delightful. Warm thanks for comment,
Date: 9/12/2022 7:39:00 AM
Congrats and well done on this awesome poem. I enjoyed watching your story unfold, just as the weather and seasons change. Hope this week finds you well. Jess :)
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Date: 9/12/2022 9:09:00 AM
Warmest thanks dear for your great comment and congratz wishes. Best wishes you too.
Date: 9/12/2022 1:45:00 AM
Well deserved POTD, love the journey through the seasons.
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Date: 9/12/2022 1:59:00 AM
Thanks so much for great comment and wishes.
Date: 9/11/2022 10:47:00 PM
S, some nice personification and nature imagery. Congratulations on your POTD ~ John
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:15:00 PM
Hi poet, thanks so much for your comment and wishes!
Date: 9/11/2022 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored with POTD. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 9/11/2022 9:01:00 PM
Warm warm thanks for the nice comment and congrat wishes,
Date: 9/11/2022 7:02:00 PM
Mother Nature seems to have menopause. :) Better watch out ! ! You paint such vivid images with your words, S.zaynab. This is both clever and creative. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 9/11/2022 9:00:00 PM
Eh he you could mean it metaphorical as in mother nafure bleeding for all the human destruction or literally in the rare cases of blood rain witnessed in some countries. Warm thanks for fun comment and nice congrats wishes,
Date: 9/11/2022 2:06:00 PM
The Gods were warm to you on this POTD day, congratulations SZaynab!! As you see, averaging 105 all summer long, Fall is my favorite season. Enjoy ~I Am Anaya
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:55:00 PM
Heyy guess my poem made you laugh so you returned the favor by making me laugh. Though i think if God Himself was awarding me He wouldve been kinder and awarded many more of mine lol neh. Im glad to hear that you love fall and so did you mean you have mostly hotter weather at your place? Warm thanks again,
Date: 9/11/2022 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations for this creative POTD :)
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Date: 9/11/2022 1:06:00 PM
Warmest thanks for the congrats and comment!
Date: 9/11/2022 9:47:00 AM
S.zaynab, this is a beautiful piece of writing and certainly deserving of the P.O.T.D. designation. CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:36:00 AM
Thanks soo much poet Milton, im sure many of yours must've gotten POTD already since you are such a fine poet.
Date: 9/11/2022 9:30:00 AM
The changing mood of Nature with the change of seasons is beautifully described with a dash of humour. Enjoyed your poem. Glad to see you here Zaynab. Congratulations on your POTD honor !
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:34:00 AM
Glad to see you here too. Warm thanks for the congrat comment.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:06:00 AM
Interesting personification of mother nature. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:28:00 AM
Warmest thanks for the fine comment and congrats.
Date: 9/11/2022 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, S. Zynab. Your imagery and alliteration made the season come to life. Enjoy your special day! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:27:00 AM
Thanks soo much poet Bill for the comment and congrats.
Date: 9/11/2022 6:53:00 AM
A nice penned piece indeed, with lovely imagery congratulations on your POTD. Regards,Gordon
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Date: 9/11/2022 6:24:00 AM
A smart good humoured write with witty atmospherics. I’m not a big fan of winter though so if you’d care to perhaps rewrite that section and call it ‘Christmas’ I’d be much obliged. Seriously though, enjoyed your poetic almanac; congrats on your POTD. Terry
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:25:00 AM
Ah um christmas must be enjoyable festive but i was going all pun fun poking at momma nature's moodswings and winter is her icy side yeah. Thanks soo much for comment and the congrats.
Date: 9/11/2022 6:11:00 AM
Zaynab, you certainly have crafted a seasonal delight in your lovely allegory of nature! I can feel the moods as the evolve though the year! Congratulations !!
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:23:00 AM
Thanks soo much for letting me know you liked my seasonal pun fun and the wishes.
Date: 9/11/2022 6:04:00 AM
A fun read Zaynab! Congratulations on POTD! Linda
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:22:00 AM
Glad its as fun pun as i intended. Warm thanks for comment n wishes ,
Date: 9/11/2022 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! You've captured the full realm of Mother Nature's power. :)Paulette
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Date: 9/11/2022 4:50:00 AM
Warm thanks for the lovely wishes and comment!
Date: 9/11/2022 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations Zaynab on an all encompassing POTD, filled with fun and humour, Mother Nature can indeed be unpredictable and fickle at times, and seasons have become less guaranteed, mostly down to human input, or perhaps output, cheers David
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Date: 9/11/2022 4:49:00 AM
Thanks for the kind congrat wishes and great eloquent comment,
Date: 9/11/2022 2:45:00 AM
Have enjoyed your humorous write, the seasons are not always nice but we pay the price of pollution. Congratulations S. zaynab on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 9/11/2022 3:00:00 AM
Warmest thanks for wishing me the congrats and for enjoying the pun humour in my poem. Now im curious to read yours too.
Date: 9/11/2022 12:33:00 AM
Back with congratulations congratulations S. zaynab on the honour of. POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 9/11/2022 2:58:00 AM
Thanks so much for letting me know , it is of my fav poems.
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