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Mother Did Not Mind

mother did not mind a kind beauty of passion and then there was me singer of night songs tone deaf to all but to me the randy cat howls mated wife, mother baker of red cherry pies one in the oven

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 1:17:00 AM

Many congrats Debbie for coveted 1st place in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2011 1:22:00 PM

Creative win..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 12:34:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Debbie

Julie Heckman

Date: 5/4/2011 9:34:00 AM

delicious! Julie

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2011 2:33:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your big win-kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 11:26:00 PM

Yours were awesome, Debs. WELL deserved win. LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 10:38:00 PM

another delight of an extraordinary poem from you , lights … super cheers for the fine win! your wry humor makes this a no.1 hit... was rooting for this.... huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2011 9:03:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your first place win in Francine's contest about Mom.. great words to enjoy a great win luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/3/2011 8:47:00 PM

These are lovely Deb. Many warm congrats for this win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/3/2011 5:56:00 PM

I am soosoo glad to see this win number uno!!! So clever and unique!! Hooray for Francine's good judgment call !! (hey...darn...I'm sorry to have missed your last contest...I was working on it...but took too much time...I see I'm too late!! I need to pay closer attention!! :) I must go read your winners!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/3/2011 5:33:00 PM

perfect amount of humor to score the bonus points Debbie, so congrats on your first place win in the contest, excellent example of senryus

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/2/2011 7:57:00 AM

Love this Senryu Debbie..words of striking significance. Wishing you best, luv..gautami

Soulfire

Date: 4/30/2011 10:44:00 AM

This is so fun and interesting Deb--with it's innuendos. Love the "singer of night songs" and "tone deaf" lines. ~Soulfire ~

James Peranteau

Date: 4/30/2011 6:17:00 AM

*clever, and witty Debbie ! I love this write dear poet ! Have a wonderful weekend...much love, james

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/30/2011 5:12:00 AM

Debbie magnificent poem great for mother's day. Anne

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2011 10:35:00 PM

i like the dead-pan but deep way you presented this piece, lights! whoot! winning's best :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 4/29/2011 7:03:00 PM

Interesting and intriguing write.Best wishes--kashinath

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/29/2011 4:18:00 PM

thank you for entering my contest Debbie, soup mail

Rick Parise

Date: 4/29/2011 3:57:00 PM

I am starting to see you very clear....lol. Very clever, funny....Enjoyed//Thanks for the definition, I see a lot of people need it....including me in weeks past..Good day, bless you, ^Rick

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 4/29/2011 3:30:00 PM

* Hi Debbie * i love the fact that * your sweetheart * not only tantalizes us with such * fantastic and intriguing poetry * almost as if a riddle or abstract painting * but also that amid a selfless gesture it seems that * your gifted light * offers virgins in verse like myself * the opportunity to possibly grow and broaden ourselves within poetics art * sooo lovely * thank you for being so kind * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/29/2011 3:25:00 PM

So clever are you....a bit of sarcastic wit, a bit of nostalgia...and humor. The whole package!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2011 3:14:00 PM

cute double meaning with the "one in the oven" if that is what you were going for! Oops, that is for a bun!! Anyway,the best one was you howling like a randy cat. Very cute, deb.