Mother Comforts

i muse at the solo black cloud as the quilt of blue-sky surrounds it 1/4/2019

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Estela Canama

Date: 3/8/2019 12:10:00 AM

Such a meaningful poem!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Estela! :)

Silent One

Date: 1/5/2019 5:58:00 AM

Love this one liner...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 8:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, Silent! :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/5/2019 1:35:00 AM

Love to see lone clouds and I see all sorts of things in it, if it's a condition then I have it, pareidolia lol. Enjoy the weekend. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 8:26:00 AM

Me too! Thanks for sharing such a cool word!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/4/2019 9:52:00 PM

I am thinking a cloud that is signalling a downpour of rain any second. Am I right Kim?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 10:24:00 PM

The last of the raindrops. Sure looked angry as the sky showed up.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 1/4/2019 8:52:00 PM

Very interesting and thought provoking ! Thanks for sharing ! This holds a different meaning for everyone who reads it I am sure just like everyone sees a different shape in the clouds. Really enjoyed

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 8:59:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kyle!