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Most Beautiful Day -Qd

If it were my most beautiful day, I would be free of “older age” pain. Youthful I’d be, with hair free of grey, knowing some dreams I still could attain. I’d be at a dance; music would play. Locked in that moment, I would remain. With a beautiful soul I would sway, dancing and dancing the night away. He’d be my king and I’d be his queen. Sept. 27, 2019 for Charles Messina's Queen Of Day 9 X 9 Poetry Contest

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/20/2020 4:09:00 PM

There's a contest that calls for Verse and the definition of Verse only confused me so I clicked over to my 'teacher' for study. You have 32 pages of poetry, my friend - wow, never checked the total number before. This is lovely; lines that resonant with me and others I wanted to dance with! Lovely. Didn't pick up on any beat though but don't trust myself so I will delightedly go read another Verse by you. Love ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2019 5:55:00 PM

hey Andrea if hubby wont dance there is still no stopping you and you can chase the greys away my friend, you certainly live life to the full that I know for sure:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2019 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Andrea, feelings are mutual :) congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/19/2019 9:17:00 AM

Congrats on your podium finish, Andrea.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/19/2019 8:29:00 AM

Congrats!! on the win my friend...lovely verse Andrea...^WW^ :o)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/19/2019 8:22:00 AM

To be attained in our dreams, free of pain. I second that! congrats on your podium win Andrea.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/19/2019 7:35:00 AM

This was beautiful Andrea. Just loved the flow and rhymes of this. Never too old to dance, even if it's not the way you used to. Now, go get your hubby on the dance floor (lol). Congratulations on your 3rd place win.. Hugs Charlie

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2019 12:14:00 PM

That would be wonderful Andrea, to be free of pain and able to dance with a partner who loves to dance. I love your entry! I am sure this will be a top winner! xxoo : )

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/28/2019 9:11:00 PM

Hello Andrea … holding on to fine memories seem to always return in later years and those times appear better with age - catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay

David Mohn

Date: 9/28/2019 5:08:00 PM

this is sweet and definitely beautiful Andrea :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/28/2019 9:54:00 AM

Hi Andrea: A very poetic and love fulled wish!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/28/2019 4:29:00 AM

Where has the time gone I often ask myself, enjoy every day, nice to look back at the beautiful days of your life though. Tom

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/27/2019 10:05:00 PM

Time does pass and we have no choice about getting older... But, we do have the hope of heaven and I know it will be much better than youth could have possibly been. Bless you sweet Andrea

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/27/2019 9:40:00 PM

Youth flew by quickly. One can never forget early romances - they are indelibly inscribed within the soul. Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/27/2019 9:30:00 PM

every day can be your most beautiful day my friend...just keep dancing your way through life...love this, so happy and upbeat :) hugs

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/27/2019 7:16:00 PM

You are not old enough yet to see the beauty in grey hair nor admire the "crow feet" earned from years of laughter, so get up and dance! Plenty of time left to worry about aches and pains! Aloha! Rico

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/27/2019 7:55:00 PM

my condition does not let me dance (the way I used to) and hubbie won't dance with me anyway! (never never in a million years) But thanks for the thought. and thank God for hair dye. haha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2019 5:04:00 PM

I feel the bouncy emotions--very apt for the dance and music you evoke..splendid write, Andrea.

Chris Green

Date: 9/27/2019 4:48:00 PM

Wonderfully written Andrea. This poem feel happy to me and I can see the festive scene as you two dance the night away.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/27/2019 7:56:00 PM

thanks for understanding what i was trying to portray, Chris.