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Mosquito Sneeze

Mosquito Sneeze

I was just about to sneeze,
When I felt a mosquito
Squat firmly upon my nose
And watched it "bite me"!

"Ah-Choo!" And up it arose
In search of another drink,
Gliding gently where he thinks--
On ^Rick's head--drilling!

~deborah burch
4/09/2011

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/16/2012 10:32:00 PM Congrats Deb on your hilarious biting win! So cute!! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 11:58:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Deborah. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 4/15/2012 12:23:00 AM Awesome piece,Deb.I love the way you sneezed to scare off the mosquito.....Congratulations on your win...Love O.A Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/14/2012 9:26:00 PM Poor Rick! Another fun buggy poem...I don't usually get to read and comment on all the winners but I was able to this evening...A special congrats to you Deborah...quick, get Rick a cool compress! ha ha. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/14/2012 9:01:00 PM Mosquitos are the worst. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/14/2012 8:53:00 PM That's funny. On rick's head!!! Big congrats. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2012 7:37:00 PM congrats Deborah on sweet success for this super entry luv.. Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 4/14/2012 8:04:00 PM Thank you so much Linda for my place and for a cool and fun contest!!! big hugs,love deb

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/11/2012 12:41:00 PM What a mosquito!! Heehee, I could just imagine this unfolding though :D Enjoyed this one :D Thanks btw, I'm happy you enjoyed my write :D Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 4/14/2012 8:04:00 PM lol...thank you Nikko! :D big huggs,love deb

Russell Sivey Date: 4/9/2012 3:26:00 PM This is a fabulously incredible write my friend! What a spectacular poem judging by these two awesome lines, "Squat firmly upon my nose, And watched it "bite me"!" just a terrible place to get bitten! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this afternoon! Terrific write! I love your poem that you have written Debbie! Great Work!! Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 4/9/2012 3:44:00 PM Ahhh, thank you dear Russell!! lol it was a fun little write...your encouragement is always so dear to me, thank you...and congrats on all your success lately...woo hoo...well done...big huggsss,love debs