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Mosquito Mayhem

Today I met a mosquito
It wasn’t very fun
She bit me here, she nipped me there
(she even bit my bum)
But I had the last laugh...
I squashed her with my thumb!

1st November 2015

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Keng Chuan Seng

January 4, 2016 at 12:39 AM

What an artsy piece ... About this animal freak.. And the justice it deserved.. And most appropriately served!

Jan Allison

January 4, 2016 at 1:16 AM

Thanks Keng:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

November 14, 2015 at 6:42 PM

Congratulations, dear Jan, on being selected POTW for this very amusing piece that brought a grin to my face! I have been bitten many times before so I can definitely ditto the experience.LOL and a 7! Pandita!

Jan Allison

November 14, 2015 at 6:47 PM

This is the first time I have ever been bitten:-( but got poetic justice with the POTW lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry

November 14, 2015 at 1:57 AM

Very cute and entertaining! Congrats!

Jan Allison

November 14, 2015 at 4:59 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilyn Williams

November 12, 2015 at 11:58 AM

Cute and painful. I love it. Nice POTW!

Jan Allison

November 12, 2015 at 12:01 PM

Thanks Marilyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

November 12, 2015 at 8:06 AM

As John John says, "and you didn't even use the p-word" but you DID use the b-word which rhymes with "thumb"! LOL Love sister Jan... Santa xoxox

Jan Allison

November 12, 2015 at 8:07 AM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

November 11, 2015 at 2:59 PM

Fantastique bravo

Jan Allison

November 11, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Merci bien Etienne it is a delight to see you again:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

November 11, 2015 at 8:15 AM

Hello Jan!! Just now getting to your wonderful Rhyme here. Bum . . . Thumb -- Okay!! Congratulations on the POTW honor and for a very special write here!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jan Allison

November 11, 2015 at 8:20 AM

I was so surprised to be awarded POTW for it Gary - guess it's poetic justice lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Samiha Zubair

November 11, 2015 at 5:42 AM

A genuine hug with the nature. Congratulations on being poet of the week

Jan Allison

November 11, 2015 at 7:58 AM

Thanks Samiha - think I got a little too close to nature with this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

November 10, 2015 at 9:12 PM

Oh my! Good on you, this should be poem of the year!!!!! hell, poem of the century!

Jan Allison

November 11, 2015 at 4:24 AM

Ha ha ha I AM going to adopt you my Vaso FOR LIFE:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

November 10, 2015 at 9:36 AM

Good . Great to read Wonderful as usual. Anisha D

Jan Allison

November 10, 2015 at 11:53 AM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

November 10, 2015 at 7:27 AM

Haha, this was great! Thanks for the laugh this morning Jan, :-)

Jan Allison

November 10, 2015 at 7:49 AM

I can laugh now Cas it wasn't funny at the time:-( hugs jan xx

Theresa Cw

November 10, 2015 at 4:28 AM

Oh my dear Jan I'm so glad you got this poem for POTW. This is so hilarious, you did have the last laugh. You always seem to brighten my day, even when I get kind of low. Have a great week ahead. live, laugh and love.... HUGGS Theresa and congratulations //

Jan Allison

November 10, 2015 at 7:48 AM

Thanks Theresa it was a real surprise - guess its poetic justice lol - I have never been bitten ever before so I had to immortalise it in a poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Neva Romaine

November 9, 2015 at 2:22 PM

Hey Jan, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTW!! I love it and especially the squashing! Well deserved honor! Be Blessed, Neva

Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 2:24 PM

Thanks Neva it was a lovely surprise:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

November 9, 2015 at 8:48 AM

Hi Jan: I love these short rhymes, especially with payback. Great write. (You should be in Florida now, they are horrendous)

Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 11:53 AM

Oh I would love the heat Ralph it is so autumnal here I just crave a drop of sunshine with no mosquitoes though - it is the first time I have ever been bitten!:-) Hugs jan xx

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

November 9, 2015 at 8:34 AM

ahahahaha....fun read...Congrats Jan :) God bless..

Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 11:52 AM

Thanks Remnants - this really is poetic justice lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

November 9, 2015 at 6:12 AM

Jan, this is so hillarious. A great choice to be selected as p.o.t.w. Congratulations! Enjoy the honor :-) Alexis

Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 7:43 AM

Thanks Alexis it was a lovely surprise:-) hugs jan xx

Red Barchettadrive

November 9, 2015 at 12:28 AM

What a fun read Jan! TY & Congrats on being chosen for poem of the week!

Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 1:12 AM

Thanks Red - it wasn't fun being bitten but this is poetic justice:-) hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs

November 8, 2015 at 8:54 PM

Congrats Jan! Great Job :)

Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 1:11 AM

Thanks Ed:-) hugs Jan xx

Rev. Gerald Dillenbeck

November 8, 2015 at 11:47 AM

This mosquito sounds familiar I thought he spoke Spanish, or would have been mosquita? He haunted my rhythmic dreams last night insisting I encourage you in the very most positive way to "at least get my squashed identity gender right" and that's all he had to say. Except, he thought your poem fun memory for this week. So, maybe he actually had the last laugh. Gerald Oliver

Jan Allison

November 8, 2015 at 11:50 AM

I had no idea the mosquitoes who bite us were female lol - I have never been bitten until we went to Malta last week - thankfully we don't have mosquitoes on our little Island:-) hugs Jan x

Richard Lamoureux

November 8, 2015 at 10:41 AM

Congratulations on POTW, this was fun!

Jan Allison

November 8, 2015 at 11:08 AM

Thanks Richard it makes up for being bitten in Malta lol - we do not have any mosquitoes on our little Island:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

November 8, 2015 at 10:32 AM

Hmmn...it almost sounds like a personification...only that I saw your replies...:-) enjoyed this again, Jan. Congrats on your POTW! hugs!

Jan Allison

November 8, 2015 at 11:07 AM

Thanks Kim lol:-) I really should dedicate this to Demetrios as I originally wrote it as 'he' I didn't realise the biters were female lol:-) hug jan xx

Vera Duggan

November 6, 2015 at 7:53 PM

Very good little verse Jan, mosquitoes damn horrible little things, they cause a deadly disease called Ross River Virus over here, but it is quite rare, you mainly get them in the wetlands and we try to keep away from them, hope you are well, take care.......Vera

Jan Allison

November 7, 2015 at 4:24 AM

Thanks for dropping by Vera hope you and Peter are well:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

November 6, 2015 at 7:29 PM

I have it unblock

Jan Allison

November 7, 2015 at 4:24 AM

Thanks Skat - went to bed - replied now:-) :-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin

November 5, 2015 at 2:04 PM

Death to mosquitoes! Death to fleas. if only a poem could kill every parasite - shame on them all. BUT, all we can do is scratch and find the humor so I really appreciate this poem ... CayCay

Jan Allison

November 6, 2015 at 3:07 PM

LOL CayCay:-) I would write one on headlice if it could kill them too lol - i worked with a girl her hair literally moved on its own:-( hugs Jan xx