Get Your Premium Membership

Mosquito Attack

This morning I awoke
I am red from head~toe
I look silly
Last night I was dinner
they feasted on me
I filled them up
Tonight comes a trap
a net around my bed
bug candles aglow
Date Written: 8/22/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/6/2021 11:16:00 AM
Always sad when we have to imprison ourselves to be saved! Mosquito be gone!
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 12:24:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I am with you, "Mosquito be gone." Have a blessed day......................
Date: 8/23/2021 12:05:00 PM
Blood-suckers! If the insects don't get you, the corporations will . . . .
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:36:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bug write. You are so right. Have a blessed day......................
Date: 8/23/2021 11:14:00 AM
Loved reading your buggy poem Paula... I hate mosquitoes... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you love this bug write. I also hate mosquitoes. Small little things. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 8/23/2021 9:14:00 AM
I really dislike mosquitoes, have been eaten alive more than once. To be avoided at all costs....Good luck in contest Paula...Delice
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:33:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. I have also been eaten more than once. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 8/22/2021 8:10:00 PM
Bug bites are unpleasant; this sounds like a fantastic contest entry!
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bug poem. Yes, bug bites are very unpleasant. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 8/22/2021 6:47:00 PM
Bug bites are no fun, this reads like a good contest entry!
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bug bite poem. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 8/22/2021 12:58:00 PM
Nice little trio of buggy poems!! I am caught between doing senryu or tanka!! The rules are for senryu even though it says tanka. I guess maybe any way will do!!
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my buggy poem. Hope to read your write soon. Have a blessed day writing away................