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Mosquito Attack

This morning I awoke I am red from head~toe I look silly Last night I was dinner they feasted on me I filled them up Tonight comes a trap a net around my bed bug candles aglow Date Written: 8/22/2021

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/6/2021 11:16:00 AM

Always sad when we have to imprison ourselves to be saved! Mosquito be gone!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 12:24:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I am with you, "Mosquito be gone." Have a blessed day......................

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/23/2021 12:05:00 PM

Blood-suckers! If the insects don't get you, the corporations will . . . .

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bug write. You are so right. Have a blessed day......................

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/23/2021 11:14:00 AM

Loved reading your buggy poem Paula... I hate mosquitoes... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:35:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you love this bug write. I also hate mosquitoes. Small little things. Have a blessed day..................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/23/2021 9:14:00 AM

I really dislike mosquitoes, have been eaten alive more than once. To be avoided at all costs....Good luck in contest Paula...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. I have also been eaten more than once. Have a blessed day..................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2021 8:10:00 PM

Bug bites are unpleasant; this sounds like a fantastic contest entry!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bug poem. Yes, bug bites are very unpleasant. Have a blessed day........................

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/22/2021 6:47:00 PM

Bug bites are no fun, this reads like a good contest entry!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:07:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bug bite poem. Have a blessed day........................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2021 12:58:00 PM

Nice little trio of buggy poems!! I am caught between doing senryu or tanka!! The rules are for senryu even though it says tanka. I guess maybe any way will do!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:05:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my buggy poem. Hope to read your write soon. Have a blessed day writing away................