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Mortal Givers

MORTAL GIVERS Who are we but mortals? That we should be so bold, So presumptuous, so arrogant As to leave the poor in the cold? Should we not think of sharing Especially the ones without, And always think of giving, With unquestionable doubt! Being an only child, Was encouraged to share, I was shown to be mild, And love god and wear, My love for him on my sleeve, For the whole world to see, For I know God, and he sees me. The needy are desperate For a loaf of bread, Their clothes rags, their shoes, A mere thread, or shred. Unemployment has gone wild, A huge percentage is going To bed hungry Around the world in every country! Did we ever think we would, Live through such an epidemic, A Covid virus, which became pandemic? We must give love, dish it out Lay it on thick, Don’t even think, Do it quick, Don’t be a scrooge, learn to share, With all, no matter who or where, Don’t ever be selfishly Only receivers, Give, give, all you are able, Be proudly one of the givers! Entering: Givers Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Regina McIntosh 24 /09/2020

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Date: 10/25/2020 11:52:00 AM
so glad to see this beautiful, thoughtful piece was a winner
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:52:00 AM
Your heartfelt appeal should not fall on deaf ears, Jenny. There is nothing more beautiful and satisfying than being able to give without expecting anything in return. Congratulations on a truly deserved win. Warm regards & Hugs, my friend // paul
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Date: 9/28/2020 4:49:00 PM
Elevating write Jennifer. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:03:00 PM
Linda Hi, nice to meet you and wonderful that you took the time to comment on my poem, thank-you very much. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2020 11:24:00 AM
Exceptional piece, I appreciate this socially relevant write. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Rick, that is very kind of you and thank you for a wonderful comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2020 7:52:00 AM
yes, such words of wisdom here, my friend x
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Jack, I do so appreciate your very kind and thoughtful comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/27/2020 8:51:00 PM
Hats off to you Jenn mou for wearing your love for God on your sleeve. You have done so with your writings and your wonderfully supportive comments. What a friend you are to me and to the Soup community. The good book says to be a cheerful giver, and you have so vividly underscored that with your poem. Lovely job, my friend. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:55:00 PM
John you are a loyal friend, thank-you for all your support on soup - I am happy that you enjoyed my poem, my parents were good people and so in love, they were a delight, my father died 18 years before my mom, but she never re-married. I had no siblings but my father (and mother) were givers. As a young teenager 13 years old I collected pictures of films stars, one day a neighbor gave me almost a cupboard full of film star magazines, my friend Ingrid also collected them. I was thrilled and after carrying a few loadfuls home my dad said,now take half of those and go give them to Ingrid, really Daddy I said, it is the right thing to do. So I did and will always remember that day! Thank you my friend, if only I could win the lottery, I would give most of it away. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/27/2020 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations Jennifer on your placement win in the contest. Well done only comment is was it was worthy of winning 1st place. Hugs and blessings my friend
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Date: 9/29/2020 1:04:00 PM
That is very sweet of you to say so Christopher - an awesome comment, thank-you. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Date: 9/27/2020 1:23:00 PM
Kudos my friend...a great message. Too much selfishness in a me, me, me world. Proud of you+ Panagiotaxxx
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Date: 9/29/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank-you Panagiota mou you are my great pal, a great Greek poetess, a sweet gal. Proud of yu too. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/27/2020 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love This. Yes, give to others. What you do not give will be left behind for others to fight over. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 9/29/2020 1:00:00 PM
Paula mu good kind friend, I appreciate your so very kind, thoughtful comments and wish you blessings galore for all your life. Hugs Jennifer.
Date: 9/27/2020 7:13:00 AM
I knew it... Congratulations on your win Jennifer! Love
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Paghunda ,you are a darling thank you for being a wonderful friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/26/2020 8:41:00 PM
Your beautiful poem on selfless giving was well deserving of a win, Jennifer. Congratulations. :)
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:00:00 PM
Thank-you Evelyn - you are a wonderful poetess and a good friend to many on soup. Thank-you for a beautiful comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/26/2020 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry. I'm so glad you entered and am delighted with your words. God bless you with many more winning poems
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Date: 9/26/2020 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Regina, I entered one of your contests for the first time and enjoyed every moment of writing and posting it. Thank you so much for my win and am really proud that you sent such an encouraging comment to me. God Bless you and yours my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/25/2020 12:54:00 PM
We should be distributing wealth to those that have none because one thing for sure, we don't take anything with us when we go. Plus, we'll all be judged one day, worth remembering. Tom
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Date: 9/26/2020 9:42:00 AM
We live in a complex, not my best choice Tom but who knows, we still have a house we built about five years ago in Pretoria in an estate called Midstream, Midridge, always give a packet of something to our security guards at the gate - at least once a week, they are really very good and protect our complex with passion. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/24/2020 4:56:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … nice and positive verse indeed Jennifer. Somehow everything is out of balance now and people are judged by their poverty and this needs to be rectified. This pandemic could have changed many things in our lives - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 9/25/2020 9:55:00 AM
The Pandemic has and no doubt will change a great deal in our lives, soon we won't be able to remember how it was! Some are concerned about the elite and that they are contemplating eliminating the poor and middle class but I think a world wide revolution cou ld occur and the reverse happen -I think of the French revolution and there have been others as well. Thanks for an excellent comment my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 9/24/2020 2:28:00 PM
OmG what a write Jennifer. This will definitely be placed. One of my favorite. Loved it. I need to learn a lot from you. This poem ought to go viral, for It is having such a beautiful message. Good luck for the contest. Love!
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Date: 9/25/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thank-you you Paghunda for the most wonderful comment and compliment. You are an excellent poet, each one of us is unique and your style is superb, keep up the good and wonderful poetry you are writing and posting. Hugs and blessing my friend.
Date: 9/24/2020 11:30:00 AM
Powerful write, Jennifer. Much of the world can relate to your poem.
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Date: 9/25/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank-you Vijay, so much is going at at present, so many people confused with so many people involved in trying to make our minds up for us, we are individuals and unique and self-aware - what we need is unity - to survive we have to be brave, truthful and honest to ourselves, we can do it Vijay, with Gods help, and our prayers we are survivors! Thank-you my friend, you are a true inspiration on soup. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/24/2020 11:16:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, I agree with this poem. Good advice for everyone. Hugs Darlene.
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Date: 9/26/2020 9:35:00 AM
Hi Darlene, I haven't been too active on Poetry soup, due to our business pressures - must look after our bread and butter. Thank-you dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/24/2020 10:47:00 AM
Wise advice. This pandemic will take some time. No one can think he/she is above the law and get away with it. ~~
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Date: 9/24/2020 11:00:00 AM
So right you are, so wise you be I see you are too wise for me. Just something, a saying actually that I think Jan and I used at school - in other words, never a truer word spoken Victor. Thank-you for your comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/24/2020 4:49:00 AM
I think this pandemic has been a huge eye opener to us all Jennifer, wise advise indeed:- adding this to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2020 6:21:00 AM
Jan last Christmas, would we have thought how we were going to spend it this year. It's a beautiful day here today 30 degrees and a public holiday so we braaied (Barbecued) and sat in the garden, and we were talking about this Christmas, how I miss the Christmas's when our children were young and we had them believing in Father Christmas with the milk and cookies and baby powder and footprints. But I still love Christmas with them now that they are older and as long as we distance and wear masks (In S.A.) at present we are allowed, to visit see each other. Tx. for adding it to your faves Jan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

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