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Morning's Breath

      ~~ MORNING'S BREATH ~~        Infant of day, born     Will cherish you as my last      Promise, smiling tasks            July 5, 2020             1a.m. PST Edited

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Date: 7/5/2020 6:54:00 PM
Perfect 575 form, poignant commentary. Well done.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/5/2020 6:56:00 PM
Greetings Greg. How great of you to comment...very sweet! Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/5/2020 6:20:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, oh so nicely done. About a baby born. Enjoy your evening my friend. hugs Darlene xxx-ooo.
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Date: 7/5/2020 6:53:00 PM
Hello, Appreciate your time and long friendship)) Panagiota xxxooo
Date: 7/5/2020 11:18:00 AM
Hopefully you'll have many more births of a new day, each day we're here is a gift from God. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/5/2020 11:25:00 AM
Hey, am running out of years! -)) Each day is a gift. I so agree. Panagiota xx
Date: 7/5/2020 9:23:00 AM
Well done...and it very well could be your last breath...smile like a blooming flower
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Date: 7/5/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo. We all think we will have a tomorrow. Not true, under any circumstances ,,,so.. Live lust day as if it were your last! I agree, The blooming, Pangie xx

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