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Morning Whispers

Undulating veils, gray and gauzy
                                   Seducing hills and valleys,
                               Whispering secrets in the morning mist.



    Received POTW!

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Karen Jones

Date: 6/16/2022 2:00:00 AM

Enchanting and pensive. Well penned. I love this Paulette. Belated congrats on potw.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/16/2022 4:32:00 AM

Thank you,Karen….I am glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Valsa George

Date: 11/21/2021 5:51:00 PM

Lovely image of the misty dawn revealing secrets through haze and fog... ! Your poem is built on the dainty and filmy threads of a gauze. Congratultions Paulette on your POTW

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/22/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Valsa. I was so inspired when I wrote this, I awoke that morning and the image was spread out before me. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

John Watt

Date: 11/1/2021 10:43:00 PM

Morning does indeed have her secrets hidden behind her fog banks and within her mists. Blessed is the early morning adventurer who watches the mystery slowly unfold like a well-paced drama. Belated congrats Paulette for your POTW honor for this immaculate tribute to the morning ~ John

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/2/2021 2:33:00 PM

Wow John, Thank you for your kind descriptive comments; you artfully set the stage of my poem. Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2021 8:39:00 AM

I was sure i had commented on this last week, many congrats on POTW Paulette:-) hugs jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/24/2021 8:47:00 AM

Jan, Thank you! Blessings, Paulette

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/20/2021 4:49:00 AM

Very beautiful! Congratulations!!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/20/2021 6:42:00 AM

Thanks Mark….morning is so blissful. Blessings, Paulette

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/18/2021 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Paulette. Congratulations on your P.O.T.W.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 4:45:00 AM

Milton, Thank you. It has been a very inspiring week for me….placing in your contest and submitting a POTW piece too! Blessings, Paulette

Garima Dubey

Date: 10/18/2021 12:22:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Paulette .Very well written.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/18/2021 12:36:00 PM

Once again, Thank you Garima...I am a big fan of the early morning~so inspiring! Blessings, Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/18/2021 9:01:00 AM

Huge congratulations, Paulette, on your POTW. How unique this lovely haiku is! "seducing hills and valleys" - what a charming line! May your creativity be blessed! Best wishes always ~ Mala

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/18/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Mala, I delight in the morning peace and beauty that I am surrounded with each day. Blessings, Paulette

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/17/2021 8:09:00 PM

"Whispering secrets in the morning mist" Such a beautiful thought. The images you paint are so vivid and tender. Congratulations Paulette, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/18/2021 9:12:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.....Morning is the canvas for my musings to evolve..... Blessings, Paulette

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/17/2021 9:32:00 AM

So imaginative, dreamy and beautiful Paulette, congratulations on poem of the week… Belle

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Belle....made my week! Blessings, Paulette

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/17/2021 8:42:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Paulette, congratulations on POTW!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 8:46:00 AM

Tania, Thank you .....It certainly feels good to be selected for the high honor of POTW. Thanks again, Blessings, Paulette

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/17/2021 8:22:00 AM

Dear Paulette, your beautiful imagery sweeps me up and away into the morning mist.. a lovely place to be inspired by gauzy whispers. Congratulations for your poem's wonderful recognition with POTW honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 8:24:00 AM

Susan, once again, thank you for stoping by with such uplifting comments....I am thrilled to have been selected as the POTW.... Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2021 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. Few words with much said. "Beautiful" Have a blessed autumn day...................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 8:00:00 AM

Hi Paula, Thank you for commenting on Morning Whispers...I am very excited to be selected POTW....it certainly puts an extra beat in my heart. Blessings, Paulette

John Lawless

Date: 10/17/2021 6:36:00 AM

This visual will roll across my mind all day. A wonderful bit of imagery...nicely done.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 7:35:00 AM

Thank you John....morning is so magical.... Blessings, Paulette

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/17/2021 6:20:00 AM

Beautiful portrait of nature, Paulette:) congratulations on POTW:)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Jo.... I am so excited to have been selected as the POTW.... Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/17/2021 6:06:00 AM

Great capture of morning hues in just a few words. Congrats on POTW, Paulette.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, a magical moment.... Blessings, Paulette

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2021 6:01:00 AM

Such beauty, such simplicity. Congrats on POTW. ;0)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 7:38:00 AM

Hi Rick, It feels like magic..... Blessings, Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/17/2021 4:11:00 AM

Your imagery is making me blush; it is powerfully penned! Wonderful!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 7:41:00 AM

Caren, Thank you .....aah I've made you blush like the magic of morning..... Blessings, Paulette

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/17/2021 1:26:00 AM

Stunning imagery Paulette, congratulations on POTW. Tom

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 7:41:00 AM

Tom, thank you for your comment "Stunning imagery", I think it is my strength. Blessings, Paulette

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/16/2021 12:04:00 PM

We are driving into such territory in December for distances are far apart and destinations therefore also. We will be driving through the Drakensberg Mountains and undulating veils in the early morning mist and the greatest part of all, is to catch sunrise at the right moment. Love this write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:37:00 PM

Jennifer, you certainly understand what I was seeing, feeling and absorbing when I wrote this. Thank you for visiting my page. Blessings, Paulette P.S. Enjoy your trip through the Drakensberg Mountains....think of my poem and feel the spiritual lift.

Constance La France

Date: 10/16/2021 6:46:00 AM

Paulette, your poem is lovely and dreamy ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:38:00 PM

Constance, Thank you for your lovely comments. Blessings, Paulette

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2021 7:33:00 PM

great imagery of nature

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:39:00 PM

Thank you Eve.....I enjoy the early morning.....it is so uplifting. Blessings, Paulette

Karen Jones

Date: 10/15/2021 5:19:00 PM

OK you penned poetically a super haiku. So beautiful...a favorite for me.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:41:00 PM

Hi Karen, Thank you, beauty is everywhere and it is so fulfilling to be able to capture it. Blessings, Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/15/2021 3:37:00 PM

Hello Paulette, oh Paulette, this is beautiful, a beautiful scene you paint with your words. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2021 10:56:00 AM

Hello Paulette, You have done well on this nature poem. Yes you do write to paint. Yes I can see the images come to life. In this poem .Blessing my friend.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, your comments validate my work; I write to "paint" and have images come alive. Blessings, Paulette