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Morning Whispers

Undulating veils, gray and gauzy
                                   Seducing hills and valleys,
                               Whispering secrets in the morning mist.



    Received POTW!

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Karen Jones

June 16, 2022 at 2:00 AM

Enchanting and pensive. Well penned. I love this Paulette. Belated congrats on potw.

Paulette Calasibetta

June 16, 2022 at 4:32 AM

Thank you,Karen….I am glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Valsa George

November 21, 2021 at 5:51 PM

Lovely image of the misty dawn revealing secrets through haze and fog... ! Your poem is built on the dainty and filmy threads of a gauze. Congratultions Paulette on your POTW

Paulette Calasibetta

November 22, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thank you Valsa. I was so inspired when I wrote this, I awoke that morning and the image was spread out before me. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

John Watt

November 1, 2021 at 10:43 PM

Morning does indeed have her secrets hidden behind her fog banks and within her mists. Blessed is the early morning adventurer who watches the mystery slowly unfold like a well-paced drama. Belated congrats Paulette for your POTW honor for this immaculate tribute to the morning ~ John

Paulette Calasibetta

November 2, 2021 at 2:33 PM

Wow John, Thank you for your kind descriptive comments; you artfully set the stage of my poem. Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison

October 24, 2021 at 8:39 AM

I was sure i had commented on this last week, many congrats on POTW Paulette:-) hugs jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta

October 24, 2021 at 8:47 AM

Jan, Thank you! Blessings, Paulette

Mark Koplin

October 20, 2021 at 4:49 AM

Very beautiful! Congratulations!!

Paulette Calasibetta

October 20, 2021 at 6:42 AM

Thanks Mark….morning is so blissful. Blessings, Paulette

L Milton Hankins

October 18, 2021 at 2:24 PM

Beautiful verse, Paulette. Congratulations on your P.O.T.W.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 19, 2021 at 4:45 AM

Milton, Thank you. It has been a very inspiring week for me….placing in your contest and submitting a POTW piece too! Blessings, Paulette

Garima Dubey

October 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM

Wonderful Haiku Paulette .Very well written.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 18, 2021 at 12:36 PM

Once again, Thank you Garima...I am a big fan of the early morning~so inspiring! Blessings, Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

October 18, 2021 at 9:01 AM

Huge congratulations, Paulette, on your POTW. How unique this lovely haiku is! "seducing hills and valleys" - what a charming line! May your creativity be blessed! Best wishes always ~ Mala

Paulette Calasibetta

October 18, 2021 at 9:09 AM

Thank you Mala, I delight in the morning peace and beauty that I am surrounded with each day. Blessings, Paulette

Brandy Nicole

October 17, 2021 at 8:09 PM

"Whispering secrets in the morning mist" Such a beautiful thought. The images you paint are so vivid and tender. Congratulations Paulette, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Paulette Calasibetta

October 18, 2021 at 9:12 AM

Thank you Brandy.....Morning is the canvas for my musings to evolve..... Blessings, Paulette

Beryl Edmonds

October 17, 2021 at 9:32 AM

So imaginative, dreamy and beautiful Paulette, congratulations on poem of the week… Belle

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 9:46 AM

Thank you Belle....made my week! Blessings, Paulette

Tania Kitchin

October 17, 2021 at 8:42 AM

Beautiful imagery Paulette, congratulations on POTW!

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 8:46 AM

Tania, Thank you .....It certainly feels good to be selected for the high honor of POTW. Thanks again, Blessings, Paulette

Susan Ashley

October 17, 2021 at 8:22 AM

Dear Paulette, your beautiful imagery sweeps me up and away into the morning mist.. a lovely place to be inspired by gauzy whispers. Congratulations for your poem's wonderful recognition with POTW honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 8:24 AM

Susan, once again, thank you for stoping by with such uplifting comments....I am thrilled to have been selected as the POTW.... Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

October 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. Few words with much said. "Beautiful" Have a blessed autumn day...................

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 8:00 AM

Hi Paula, Thank you for commenting on Morning Whispers...I am very excited to be selected POTW....it certainly puts an extra beat in my heart. Blessings, Paulette

John Lawless

October 17, 2021 at 6:36 AM

This visual will roll across my mind all day. A wonderful bit of imagery...nicely done.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 7:35 AM

Thank you John....morning is so magical.... Blessings, Paulette

Joanna Daniel

October 17, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Beautiful portrait of nature, Paulette:) congratulations on POTW:)

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 7:37 AM

Thank you Jo.... I am so excited to have been selected as the POTW.... Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit

October 17, 2021 at 6:06 AM

Great capture of morning hues in just a few words. Congrats on POTW, Paulette.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 7:38 AM

Thank you Vijay, a magical moment.... Blessings, Paulette

Richard Lamoureux

October 17, 2021 at 6:01 AM

Such beauty, such simplicity. Congrats on POTW. ;0)

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 7:38 AM

Hi Rick, It feels like magic..... Blessings, Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

October 17, 2021 at 4:11 AM

Your imagery is making me blush; it is powerfully penned! Wonderful!

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 7:41 AM

Caren, Thank you .....aah I've made you blush like the magic of morning..... Blessings, Paulette

Tom Cunningham

October 17, 2021 at 1:26 AM

Stunning imagery Paulette, congratulations on POTW. Tom

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 7:41 AM

Tom, thank you for your comment "Stunning imagery", I think it is my strength. Blessings, Paulette

Jennifer Proxenos

October 16, 2021 at 12:04 PM

We are driving into such territory in December for distances are far apart and destinations therefore also. We will be driving through the Drakensberg Mountains and undulating veils in the early morning mist and the greatest part of all, is to catch sunrise at the right moment. Love this write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:37 PM

Jennifer, you certainly understand what I was seeing, feeling and absorbing when I wrote this. Thank you for visiting my page. Blessings, Paulette P.S. Enjoy your trip through the Drakensberg Mountains....think of my poem and feel the spiritual lift.

Constance La France

October 16, 2021 at 6:46 AM

Paulette, your poem is lovely and dreamy ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:38 PM

Constance, Thank you for your lovely comments. Blessings, Paulette

Eve Roper

October 15, 2021 at 7:33 PM

great imagery of nature

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:39 PM

Thank you Eve.....I enjoy the early morning.....it is so uplifting. Blessings, Paulette

Karen Jones

October 15, 2021 at 5:19 PM

OK you penned poetically a super haiku. So beautiful...a favorite for me.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:41 PM

Hi Karen, Thank you, beauty is everywhere and it is so fulfilling to be able to capture it. Blessings, Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 15, 2021 at 3:37 PM

Hello Paulette, oh Paulette, this is beautiful, a beautiful scene you paint with your words. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 17, 2021 at 10:56 AM

Hello Paulette, You have done well on this nature poem. Yes you do write to paint. Yes I can see the images come to life. In this poem .Blessing my friend.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:44 PM

Thank you Darlene, your comments validate my work; I write to "paint" and have images come alive. Blessings, Paulette