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morning tea with specs on... blurred headlines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/12/2012 1:50:00 AM
another stimulating read from you kashi bud.... pecs and blurred headlines; whi can beat that... might be senryu?? .. wow! come over! :) huggs!
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:09:00 PM
Kash, just re-reading this one. It should do well in the contest. I see Gwen is trying to convince you to write about Christmas stockings. Do TRY it!! The Night before Xmas is a very short story that is the most famous one for kids to read before Xmas.
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Date: 11/30/2011 2:48:00 AM
Oh Kash--you must write about christmas stockings...according to my local Indian friends, you just had your Christmas celebration a month ago....u should read the popular poem...Twas the Night Before Christmas for some inspiration...u will love it. This haiku is fab. Love the blurred headlines...if u are bored, read my old fav..I Adore You lil Bean...it's in my poems list. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 11/29/2011 5:11:00 PM
Must be the steam Kashi - headlines probably weren't wortg reading anyway. Your are getting really good with your ku's!
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Date: 11/28/2011 7:24:00 PM
Dear Kash,,, nice haiku... is the blurred headlines... from spilling your tea on paper... or from not finding reading glasses... lol..maybe from morning eyes... that is why i love haiku's... we view it from any view... enjoyed,.. have yourself a very lovely night,..xox~ p.d.
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Date: 11/28/2011 8:50:00 AM
LOL, I'm a total zombie in the mornings. Witty piece, Kash : )
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Date: 11/27/2011 3:46:00 PM
haha. I love the funny imagery, Kash. Do you wear specs??
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Date: 11/27/2011 10:22:00 AM
Sometimes blurred is the best way to see them.
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Date: 11/27/2011 7:46:00 AM
Same here my friend only with Coffee....lol enjoyed your morning Haiku.. Michael
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