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Morning Sings

Morning Sings A drizzle falls these morning skies in misted thoughts so free For as I feel my heart does beat this love for you from me Of darkened skies and clouded so, still in my world does shine The brightest sun filled winter day, for I know that you are mine In dreams I cast a thousand words so that your mind might hear My wish a never ending song if only you were here I stand among the faintest rain, my face wet from above For I shall wait till morning sings and brings to me your love Good morning Soupers

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Carolyn Fish

Date: 1/4/2017 1:32:00 PM

Perfect, especially love the third stanza "In dreams I cast a thousand words", very unique imagery. Well done!

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thanks so very much Carolyn for your kind words. I appreciate your visit today.

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/3/2017 11:03:00 AM

Love conquer all! Good morning Chris this is such a lovely morning read :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:58:00 AM

Good morning Akkina, I am happy you stopped by.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/3/2017 9:42:00 AM

Oh...nothing better than a love song in the rain on an early Winter morn.Welcome back Chris.Such a lovely poem.: )

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:57:00 AM

Good morning Charmaine, thank you so much for your wonderful morning comment.

Darren White

Date: 1/3/2017 9:33:00 AM

Good morning Chris. I hope your morning will sing and bring your loved one to you.

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:56:00 AM

Good morning Darren. Thanks so much my friend.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/3/2017 9:06:00 AM

A dry haven even in the rain...It's been raining for two days here. I guess we should be thankful it isn't snow. Hope you had a nice new year with loved ones.

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:56:00 AM

Yep, I'll take days of rain over day of snow anytime. :) Thanks so much Tim.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/3/2017 9:05:00 AM

Good morning Chris, the morning is looking so beautiful. Good content and amazing imagery. These lines are so poetic . And the melody within this verse is singing a sweet tune. A without a doubt seven.PS, Welcome back my friend. I hope your year going good so far: -) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:55:00 AM

Good morning Alexis. Thanks so much for stopping by today. You've made it a beautiful morning for me. :)