Morning Salutations - Lai

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~Morning Salutations~ (Lai) Sunr'se softly soars in Greets all with a grin. Bells ring folks get out,go in the suns a tad din Kids sing making notes with pins Love birds sweet songs in hearts brings. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 December,28,2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/29/2014 3:36:00 AM

Very sweet calm morning D. I do cherish such morning.A dreamlike sequence. You are a poet of dream. Love--rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/30/2014 1:25:00 AM

Hi Rajat! Thank you so much for dropping by and very awesome comments my very dear friend! You're so kind and sweet! I wish you the happiest and best New Year ever! I pray that 2015 is the best to you in all! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/28/2014 4:18:00 AM

A real phantasmagoric morning, dear Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/28/2014 4:46:00 AM

Eh Demetrios good morning to you my very dear friend. Thank you so kindly for visiting me again and the very awesome comment you left me behind. You have no idea how much I appreciate it and you. You always so very kind and sweet. I wish you a very Happy New Year and your family! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.