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Morning Run

As the sweat rolled down the nape of his neck, I thirsted for his strong hold and his sweet touch. I wanted to stop him and talk; but I just watched him pass by as I smiled at him and he smiled back. His sparkling eyes say I should try again!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2011 9:41:00 AM
Nice example of an etheree. Great descriptiveness in this work.
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Date: 11/27/2010 3:43:00 AM
Very romantic work..Good luck in your meeting him..I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2010 4:36:00 PM
Try again, Brandee! Forgive me but I tend to be adventurous...can be a good thing... sometimes. Love this and I mark it as one of my favs. today! Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/13/2010 3:52:00 PM
Wow, loved this Brandee. Lacing up my running shoes right now, hoping to pass you along the path --- lol. Loved the picture this paints. Easy to read, easy to understand. Nice flow. Nice Imagery. Nice poem. Joe
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Date: 10/5/2010 10:22:00 AM
A pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Brandee. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:10:00 AM
A very passionate feelings of love you have expressed well,Brandee
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:36:00 AM
wow, such perception. lovethis. Harry
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