Morning Run

As
the sweat
rolled down the
nape of his neck,
I thirsted for his
strong hold and his sweet touch.
I wanted to stop him and
talk; but I just watched him pass by 
as I smiled at him and he smiled back.
His sparkling eyes say I should try again!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:41 AM
Nice example of an etheree. Great descriptiveness in this work.
Kendrick Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 3:43 AM
Very romantic work..Good luck in your meeting him..I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara
Haick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 4:36 PM
Try again, Brandee! Forgive me but I tend to be adventurous...can be a good thing... sometimes. Love this and I mark it as one of my favs. today! Love, Audrey
Flach Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Wow, loved this Brandee. Lacing up my running shoes right now, hoping to pass you along the path --- lol. Loved the picture this paints. Easy to read, easy to understand. Nice flow. Nice Imagery. Nice poem. Joe
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 10:22 AM
A pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Brandee. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 4:10 AM
A very passionate feelings of love you have expressed well,Brandee
Horsman Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 1:36 AM
wow, such perception. lovethis. Harry
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