Morning Rain

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morning rain soaks leaves and stripped of all pretension handshake of two oaks 11/11/2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2022 1:41:00 PM

Great picture to maych your words, my friend. I liked it! Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/12/2022 7:15:00 PM

Ain't that something?! What a shake!! btw: Make mine chocolate milk(shake).

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2022 10:27:00 AM

This is my front yard! A chocolate milk shake might muddy up the yard ;)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/11/2022 7:06:00 AM

You caught my eye with the photo.. Great imagery and feel well written Haiku. It's strange that a tree or plant can stand nude looking like it's dead, but nature's way of rebirth. I have a large Living Oak in my front yard that rarely loses to many leaves, but I leave in Texas. Many blessing my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2022 10:41:00 AM

This is my front yard. Glad you enjoyed the haiku. Thank you, Eve!